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SHORTCUTS FOR THESTUDENT WRITER

JAY SILVERMANNassau Community College

ELAINE HUGHESlate of Nassau Community College

DIANA ROBERTS WIENBROERNassau Community College, emerita

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Her infinite variety.

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CONTENTS

Acknowledgments viiHow to Use Shortcuts for the Student Writer xi

PART 1: CORRECTNESSA Word about Correctness 2Commonly Confused Words 3One Word or Two? 10Spelling 13Capitalization 16Abbreviations and Numbers 18Apostrophes 20Consistent Pronouns 21Correct Pronouns 24Vague Pronouns 26Recognizing Complete Sentences 28Period or Comma? Run-on Sentences and

Sentence Fragments 31Feature: Using but, however, although 37

Commas 38Semicolons 41Colons 42Dashes and Parentheses 43Quotation Marks 45Titles: Underlines, Italics, or Quotations Marks 49Shifting Verb Tenses 50Verb Agreement 52Word Endings: s and ed 53Tangled Sentences 55

PART 2: PUTTING A PAPER TOGETHERWhat to Do When You’re Stuck 60Addressing Your Audience 64Writing with a Thesis 66Finding an Organization for Your Essay 69Introductions 72Paragraphs—Long and Short 74Transitions 77Incorporating Quotations 79

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Conclusions 81How to Make a Paper Longer (and When to Make

It Shorter) 82How to Work on a Second Draft 84Shortcuts for “Word” 87Proofreading Tips 92Format of College Papers 94

Special Case: Writing an Essay in Class 97Special Case: Writing about Literature 100

PART 3: THE RESEARCH PAPERHow to Start a Research Project 108Three Essential Research Skills 111

Feature: When You Find Too Few or Too Many Sources 112

Getting Information at the Library 117Getting Information Online 120

Feature: Sizing Up a Website 121Writing the Research Paper 123Plagiarism (Cheating) 128What Is Documentation? 129Documentation: The MLA Style 131Documentation: The APA Style 146Documentation: The Chicago Style (Footnotes) 155

PART 4: GROWING AS A WRITERKeeping a Journal 164Adding Details 166Recognizing Clichés 168Eliminating Offensive Language 169Trimming Wordiness 171Using Strong Verbs 173Varying Your Sentences 175Finding Your Voice 180

Postscript 181A List of Valuable Sources 183About the Authors 188Index 189Troubleshooting Guide 195

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ACKNOWLEDGMENTS

For their careful reading and questioning of various drafts ofShortcuts for the Student Writer, we wish to thank Beverly Jensen;Polly Marshall, Hinds Community College; Nell Ann Pickett,Hinds Community College; and Larry Richman, VirginiaHighlands Community College. Special thanks go to Sue Pohja,of Langenscheidt Publishers, Inc., whose enthusiasm for thisbook helped to create a trade edition. Lisa Moore, AnneStameshkin, Mary Glenn, and Melissa Scuereb, our editors atMcGraw-Hill, have given Shortcuts for the Student Writer a newburst of life by appreciating its virtues but also encouraging usto think about it in new ways.

Noah Silverman contributed the idea and several details for thenew chapter on “Shortcuts for ‘Word.’ ” James and DavidHughes have graciously helped to make a smooth transition tothe sixth edition. In addition, we also want to thank Ethel andJimmy Pickens, Peggy Griffin, Ruth Green, and Peggy SueDickinson who continue to support our work with theirencouragement, love, and spirit.

We are grateful for the encouragement and enthusiasm of ourcolleagues in the English Department at Nassau CommunityCollege. In particular, we wish to thank Paula Beck, JamesBlake, Mimi Quen Cheiken, Kathryn Tripp Feldman, RebeccaFraser, Emily Hegarty, Jeanne Hunter, Bernice Kliman, HeddaMarcus, Kathy McHale, John Tucker, Dominick Yezzo, and ScottZaluda.

We also appreciate the thoughtful comments of Selena StewartAlexander, Brookhaven College; Jeffrey Andelora, Arizona StateUniversity; Andrew J. Auge, Loras College; Janet Auten,American University; Doris Barkin, City College; Judy Bechtel,North Kentucky University; Joyce Bender, OklahomaPanhandle State University; Michel de Benedictis, Miami Dade

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Community College; Chris Brooks, Wichita State University;Michael Browner, Miami Dade Community College; Timothy R.Bywater, Dixie State College; Joseph T. Calabrese, University ofNevada; Robin Calitri, Merced College; Lawrence Carlson,Orange Coast College; Randolph Cauthen, BloomburgUniversity; Diana Cox, Amarillo College; Suzanne Crawford,Saddleback College; Natalie S. Daley, Linn-Benton CommunityCollege; Katherine Restaino Dick; Ralph G. Dille, University ofSouthern Colorado; Michael DiRaimo, Manchester CommunityCollege; Steffeny Fazzio, Salt Lake Community College; MelanyS. Fedor, Keystone College; Susan Finlayson, AdirondackCommunity College; Nadine Gandia, Miami Dade CommunityCollege–InterAmerican Campus; Ellen Gardiner, University ofMississippi; James F. Gerlach, Northwestern Michigan College;Matthew Goldie, NYCTC; Robert Hach, Miami DadeCommunity College; Andrew Halford, Paducah CommunityCollege; Daniel A. Hannon, Mount Hood Community College;Georgina Hill, Western Michigan University; Marie Iglesias-Cardinale, Genesee Community College; Gwendolyn James,Columbia Basin College; Goldie Johnson, Winona StateUniversity; Richard Klecan, Pima Community College–East;Gina Larson, Kirkwood Community College; Jacqueline Lautin,Hunter College; Joe Lostracco, Austin Community College;Ellen McCumby, St. Clair County Community College; MaryMcFarland, Fresno City College; Deborah Mutnick, Long IslandUniversity; Kurt Neumann, William Rainey Harper College;Stuart Noel, Georgia Perimeter College; David Norlin, BethanyCollege; Roger Ochse, Black Hills University; Patricia HarkinsPierre, University of the Virgin Islands; Bonnie Plumber,Eastern Kentucky University; Sims Cheek Poindexter, CentralCarolina Community College; Retta Porter, Hinds CommunityCollege; Bruce Reeves, Diablo Valley College; Lois Ann Ryan,Manchester Community Technical College; Sara L. Sanders,Coastal Community College; Wilma Shires, SoutheasternOklahoma State University; Patricia Silcox, Florida KeysCommunity College; Jeanne Smith, Oglala Lakota College;Virginia Whatley Smith, University of Alabama; Janet K.Stadulis, Lakeland Community College; Stephen Straight,Manchester Community College; A. Gordon Van Ness III,Longwood College; Winnie Wood, Wellesley College; and MaryZdrojkowski, University of Michigan.

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This book would not have existed but for our students—both as the audience we had in mind and as perceptive readers andcritics.

Finally, we note with great sadness the passing of Beverly Jensenand Elaine Hughes. Beverly, wife of Jay Silverman, helped us incountless ways. Her fine editing eye, clever examples, and ideasimproved every chapter, and her encouragement and deliciousbaked goods sustained our meetings. Elaine, our truly belovedco-author, was at the heart of a collaboration that has alwaysbeen a joy. A supportive friend, she was also the tough criticwho made us pause to reconsider, revise, or even restart. It wasthis same approach that infused her teaching and her ownwriting. Above all, she believed in the value of writing—andliving—with spirit.

Jay SilvermanDiana Roberts Wienbroer

BY THE SAME AUTHORS

Rules of Thumb: A Guide for Writers, 6th edition

Good Measures: A Practice Book to Accompany Rules of Thumb

(Exercises keyed to the pages of Rules of Thumb)

Rules of Thumb for Business Writers

Rules of Thumb for Research

Rules of Thumb for Online Research

(by Diana Roberts Wienbroer)

Writing from the Inner Self

(by Elaine Hughes)

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HOW TO USE SHORTCUTS FOR THE STUDENT WRITER

This book is for you if you love to write, but it’s also for you ifyou have to write. Shortcuts for the Student Writer is a quick guidethat you can use easily, on your own, and feel confident in yourwriting.

We suggest that you read Shortcuts for the Student Writer in smalldoses, out of order, when you need it. It’s not like a novel thatkeeps you up late into the night. You’ll need to read a few linesand then pause to see if you understand. After ten minutes, setthe book aside. From time to time, look at the same points againas a reminder.

Part 1, “Correctness,” covers the most commonmistakes. We put these rules first because they are whatmost students worry about and will want to have handy.However, when you are writing your ideas, don’t getdistracted with correctness; afterwards, take the time tolook up the rules you need.

Part 2, “Putting a Paper Together,” takes you throughthe stages of writing an essay—from coming up withideas to proofreading.

Part 3, “The Research Paper,” tells you how to conduct aresearch project with confidence.

Part 4, “Growing as a Writer,” will help you to develop aclear, strong style of writing.

You won’t necessarily use these parts in order because theprocess of writing does not follow a set sequence. Generatingideas, organizing, revising, and correcting all happen at severalpoints along the way.

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Shortcuts for the Student Writer doesn’t attempt to cover everylittle detail of grammar and usage, but it does cover the mostcommon problems we’ve seen as teachers of writing over thepast thirty years.

Sometimes when you travel, there is only one route to follow.However, sometimes there’s a shortcut, which can get you toyour destination faster and maybe with less traffic. We hopethat these “shortcuts” will make writing less stressful for you sothat you can concentrate on what you want to say, and maybeeven enjoy the journey.

Jay SilvermanDiana Roberts Wienbroer

PART

CORRECTNESSA Word about CorrectnessCommonly Confused WordsOne Word or Two?SpellingCapitalizationAbbreviations and NumbersApostrophesConsistent PronounsCorrect PronounsVague PronounsRecognizing Complete SentencesPeriod or Comma? Run-on Sentences and

Sentence FragmentsCommasSemicolonsColonsDashes and ParenthesesQuotation MarksTitles: Underlines, Italics, or Quotation MarksShifting Verb TensesVerb AgreementWord Endings: s and edTangled Sentences

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A WORD ABOUT CORRECTNESS

Too much concern about correctness can inhibit your writing;too little concern can come between you and your readers.Don’t let the fear of errors dominate the experience of writingfor you. On the other hand, we would be misleading you if we told you that correctness doesn’t matter. Basic errors inwriting will distract and turn off even the most determinedreaders. We encourage you to master the rules presented hereas quickly as possible so that you can feel secure about yourwriting. Once that happens, you’ll be free to concentrate onwhat you want to say.

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COMMONLY CONFUSED WORDS

A spellchecker won’t catch these words. Find the ones that giveyou trouble and learn those.

■ WORDS THAT SOUND ALIKE

OR LOOK ALIKE

accept To take, to receive

Most people do not accept criticismgracefully.

except Not including

Everybody except the piano player stoppedplaying.

affect To change or influence

Even nonprescription drugs can affect us insignificant ways.

effect The result, the consequence

Effect is usually a noun, so you’ll find the oran in front.

Scientists have studied the effects ofaspirin on heart disease.

brake The mechanism that stops the vehicle; tohalt any motion

Brake on the approach, accelerate on thecurve.

break A separation; to shatter or separate intopieces or parts

After the break, they resumed thenegotiations.

Don’t break the seal if you plan to return thesoftware.

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choose Present tense (rhymes with news)

Frank Gehry chooses pliable materials forhis architecture.

chose Past tense (rhymes with nose)

Napoleon chose officers based on theirability rather than on their familyconnections.

conscience The sense of right and wrong

His conscience was clear.

conscious Aware

Flora became conscious of someone elsein the room.

it’s It is. Test by substituting it is.

It’s time to find a new solution.

its Possessive

Every goat is attached to its own legs.

No apostrophe. It is cannot be substituted.

lead A metal (rhymes with red); to providedirection (rhymes with reed)

Place a lead apron over the patient’s bodyduring dental X-rays.

For many years, Prospero leads a quiet life.

led Past tense of lead

Ms. Salina led the department for fortyyears.

loose Not tight

After he lost thirty pounds, his jeans wereall loose.

lose To misplace

My father would constantly lose his car keys.

4 COMMONLY CONFUSED WORDS

To be defeated

Everyone predicted that Truman would lose.

no, new, now, No is negative; new is not old; now is theknow, knew present moment. Know and knew refer to

knowledge.

of, have Remember: could have, should have, wouldhave—or would’ve—not would of

passed A course, a car, a football; also passed away(died)

Kirtley passed me on the street; he alsopassed English.

Saturday he passed for two touchdowns.

The coach passed away.

past Yesterdays (the past; past events); also,beyond

Rousseau could never forget his pastromances.

You can’t rewrite the past.

Go two miles past the railroad tracks.

quiet Spike Jones rarely played quiet music.

quit Mrs. Salvatore quit her job the day shewon the lottery.

quite Hippos move quite fast, considering theirbulk.

than Comparison

I’d rather dance than eat.

then Next

She then added a drop of water.

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their Something is theirs.

Wild dogs care for their young communally.

there A place

Go over there.

There is; there are; there was; there were

There are several theories to explainNapoleon’s retreat.

they’re They are

They’re not in a position to negotiate.

to Direction

Give it to me. Go to New York.

A verb form

To see, to run, to be

(Note that you barely pronounce to.)

too More than enough

Too hot, too bad, too late, too much.

Also

Me, too!

(Note that you pronounce too clearly.)

two 2

were Past tense

You were, we were, they were.

we’re We are

We’re a nation of immigrants.

where A place

Where were you when the lights went out?

whether If—not weather (rain or snow)

No one knows whether he was murdered.

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who’s Who is

Who’s there? Who’s coming with us?

whose Possessive

Whose diamond is this?

woman One person

For the first time, a woman was named asCEO.

women Several of them

This woman is different from all otherwomen.

Remember: a woman; a man

worse When comparing two things, one is worsethan the other.

worst When comparing three or more things, oneis the worst. The almost always comesbefore worst.

your Belonging to you. Use only for yourhouse, your car—not when you mean you are.

Your relationship with your family changeswhen you marry.

you’re You are

You’re going to question my logic.

■ WORDS FREQUENTLY MISUSED

a, an, the Use a before words starting withconsonant sounds or long u (a bat, a coat, aunion).

Use an before words starting with vowelsor pronounced as if they did (an age, anegg, an hour, an M&M).

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Use the rather than a or an when referringto one specific item.

I use the small knife for chopping ginger.

Use a or an rather than the when referringto any one out of a group.

I use a knife to chop ginger.

amount, number Use amount for substances that cannot becounted (an amount of water).

Use number for items that can be counted(a number of peanuts).

etc., and so forth Etc. is the abbreviation of et cetera (Latinfor “and so forth”). The c is at the end,followed by a period. Don’t write and etc.

It’s better style to use and so forth, whichis English, rather than etc.

fewer, less Use fewer for items that can be counted(fewer headaches).

Use less for substances that cannot becounted (less pain).

good, well Test by trying your sentence with both.

If well fits, use it.

Maybloom plays third base well.

Maybloom is a good third baseman.

But note these tricky cases:

Olivia looks good. (She’s good looking.)

Rivka looks well. (She’s no longer sick.)

Clara sees well. (Her eyes work.)

lay To put something down

-ing

She is laying the cards on the table.

laid Past tense

He laid the cards on the table.

Once you lay something down, it lies there.

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lie To recline

As a child, I loved to lie in the hammock.

lay Past tense (here’s the tricky part)

One day I lay in the hammock for five hours.

Lied always means “told a lie.”

lying Reclining

Cleopatra was lying on a silken pillow.

Staying in place

The cards were lying on the table.

Telling a lie

The manufacturers were lying to the newsmedia.

so, very Avoid using so when you mean very.Instead of “It was so cold,” write “It wasvery cold,” or better yet “It was fourdegrees below zero.” It is correct to use sowhen it is followed by that: “It was socold that we could stay outside for only afew minutes.”

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ONE WORD OR TWO?

If you can put another word between them, you’ll know to keepthem separate. Otherwise, you’ll have to check them one by one.

a lot Always written as two words

A lot of teachers—a whole lot—find “a lot”too informal.

all ready We were all ready for Grandpa’s wedding.

already Those crooks have already taken theirpercentage.

all right Always two words

a long Childhood seems like a long time.

along They walked along the Navajo Trail.

a part I want a part of the American pie.

apart The twins were rarely apart.

at least Always two words

each other Always two words

even though Always two words

everybody Jimmy’s comments incensed everybody.

(Every body means every corpse.)

every day It rains every day, every single day.

everyday Fernando put on his everyday clothes.

(Every day is much more common thaneveryday.)

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every one Every one of the beavers survived the flood.

everyone Everyone likes pizza.

in depth Always two words

in fact Always two words

in order Always two words

in spite of Always three words

intact Always one word

into Always one word

in touch Always two words

itself Always one word

myself Always one word

nobody Nobody knows how Mr. Avengail makes hismoney. (No body refers to a corpse.)

no one Always two words

nowadays Always one word

nevertheless Always one word

somehow Always one word

some time I need some time alone.

sometimes Sometimes your mouth can get you intotrouble.

throughout Always one word

whenever Always one word

whereas Always one word

wherever Always one word

withheld Always one word

without Always one word

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Hyphenated Words

• Hyphens are used in compound words.

self-employedin-lawsseventy-fivehappy-go-lucky

• Hyphens make a multiple-word adjective before a noun, butnot after it.

Alfred Hitchcock is a well-known filmmaker.Alfred Hitchcock is well known as a filmmaker.

George Eliot was a nineteenth-century author.George Eliot wrote in the nineteenth century.

The trip was a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity.An opportunity like this comes only once in a lifetime.

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SPELLING

There’s no getting around it. Correct spelling takes patience. Butyou can save time by learning the rules that fit your errors and byusing a spellchecker on a computer.

Using a Spellchecker

When using a computer, always use the spellcheck feature.However, a spellchecker will miss homonyms like to and too,than and then. It may also give you a different word from theone you wanted. Watch out for mixups like defiantly anddefinitely.

If you use the AutoCorrect feature, be sure to look for automaticchanges that you don’t want.

I Before E

Use I before EExcept after COr when sounded like AAs in neighbor and weigh.

believe deceive freightfriend receive veinpiece conceit

Exceptions:

weird foreign leisure seize their

Word Endings

The quiet -ed endings:

Three -ed endings are not always pronounced clearly, but theyneed to be written.

used to supposed to prejudiced

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-sk and -st endings:

When s is added to words like these, it isn’t always clearlypronounced, but it still needs to be there.

asks consists psychologistsrisks insists scientistsdesks suggests terroriststasks costs interests

The -y endings:

When a verb ends in y, keep the y when you add ing. To add sor ed, change the y to i.

crying cries criedstudying studies studiedtrying tries tried

When a noun ends in y, make it plural by changing the y to iand adding es.

activities families theories

Exception: Simply add s to nouns ending in ey.

attorneys monkeys valleys

p or pp? t or tt?

Listen to the vowel before the added part.

If the vowel sounds like its own letter name, use only oneconsonant:

writer writing

The i sounds like the name of the letter i, so you use one t.

If the vowel before the added part has a sound different from itsname, double the consonant:

written

The i sounds like the i in it, so you double the t.

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The same method works for hoping and hopping. Listen for thedifferent sounds of the letter o.

Here are some other examples:

beginning dropping quittingstopped occurred referred

An exception: coming.

Words with Prefixes and Suffixes

When you add a prefix or suffix, you usually keep the spellingof the root word.

misspell suddenness dissatisfactionhopeful disappear governmentunnoticed environment

The -ly endings also follow this rule.

really totally lonelyfinally unfortunately usually

But truly does not follow the rule.

Exception: The final e is usually dropped before a suffix thatstarts with a vowel.

debatable sensible lovable

Tricky Words

Look hard at the middle of each word:

definitely embarrass interestseparate accommodate necessaryrepetition probably familiaropinion

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CAPITALIZATION

Capitalize the first letter of every sentence and of names of people,localities, days of the week, and months. Do not capitalize foremphasis.

Do Capitalize

• Subjects in school whose names come from names ofcountries; complete titles of courses

English Spanish History 101

• In titles, the first word, major words, and words of fiveletters or more

The Red and the Black Men Against the Sea

• Family names like Mother, Aunt, or Grandfather only whenused as a name or with a name (but not after my, his, her,their, our)

Papa was cared for by Uncle Manny after my mother left.

• Days of the week

Wednesday Saturday

• People’s titles when they precede their names

Dr. Judd Officer Zublonski Major Gross

• Brand names

Kleenex Coca-Cola Domino’s Pizza

(But not the product itself if it is not part of the company’sname—thus, Crest toothpaste)

• Public holidays

Thanksgiving Fourth of July

• The entire name of a specific place, event, and so forth

Oak Street Battle of Gettysburg Calhoun High School

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Do Not Capitalize

• Subjects in school whose names do not come from thenames of countries

history psychology marketing

• Genres of literature and art

novel poetry gangster movies jazz

• Family names like mother, aunt, grandfather after a, the, my,his, her, their, our

my mother his aunt the grandmother

• Seasons of the year

spring autumn

• Titles of people separate from their names

I went to the doctor.Two generals and an admiral were consulted.

• Generic names

facial tissues soda pop pizza

• Private celebrations

birthday anniversary

• A type of place, event, and so forth

a dark street the eve of battle high school

• Most diseases

diabetes cancer tuberculosis

But note: Alzheimer’s disease (the discoverer’s name iscapitalized) and AIDS

• For emphasis

Do not capitalize whole words (AMNESIA); do notcapitalize an entire essay or Internet message.

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ABBREVIATIONS AND NUMBERS

Avoid abbreviations, except for words that are always abbreviated.Spell out numbers that take only a word or two.

■ ABBREVIATIONS

• As a general rule, don’t abbreviate—especially don’t useabbreviations like these in your papers:

dept. yr. NY Eng. Thurs. b/cw/o co. & gov’t. Prof. thru

• But do abbreviate words that you always see abbreviated,such as certain titles with proper names and well-knownorganizations:

Mr. Smith FBI a.m.St. Bartholomew IBM p.m.

• Abbreviate doctor only before a name:

the doctor Dr. Salk

■ NUMBERS

Spell Out

• Numbers that take only one or two words

nine twenty-seven two billion

• Numbers that begin a sentence

One hundred four years ago the ship sank.The ship sank 104 years ago.

• Numbers that form a compound word

a two-year-old baby

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• Fractions

one-half

• Times using o’clock, half past, and quarter

two o’clock half past four

Use Numerals for

• Numbers that require three or more words

1,889 162

• Dates, page references, room numbers, statistics, addresses,percentages, and dollars and cents

May 6, 1974 7,500 residents 99.44%page 2 221B Baker Street $5.98

• A list or series of numbers

1, 4, 9, 16, 25seats 12, 14, and 16

• Exact times

2:00 p.m. my 8:30 class

• Papers on scientific or technical subjects

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APOSTROPHES

Most of the time, when you add an s to a word you don’t need anapostrophe. Use apostrophes for contractions and possessives.

Do Not Add an Apostrophe; Just Add s or es

To make a plural

Two bosses Three dogs Five familiesthe 1980s six CDs

To a present-tense verb

He sees. She says. It talks. Carol sings.

Look hard at sees and says: no apostrophe.

Add an Apostrophe

To a contraction (put the apostrophe where the missing letter was)

doesn’t = does not it’s = it is that’sdon’t I’m they’redidn’t you’re what’s

To a possessive

my mother’s car Baldwin’s style a night’s sleepGus’s hair children’s toys a family’s historyMs. Jones’s opinion women’s room today’s world

To the plural of a single letter (but not a number)

His g’s look like 8s. two A’s and three B’s

• If the word is plural and already ends with s, just add anapostrophe after the s.

my friends’ apartment (several friends)my grandparents’ dishes

• Pronouns in possessive form have no apostrophe.

its hers his ours theirs yours

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CONSISTENT PRONOUNS

Make a conscious choice of your pronouns. Don’t shift from aperson to they to you to I.

The problem comes with sentences likeI got mad; it does make you feel upset when people don’tlisten.

A young person has to manage their time well if they wantto get ahead.

Unless someone loves bluegrass music, they won’t like this CD.

A person and someone are singular; they and their are plural.Mixing these words in one sentence leads to awkward writingand creates errors. Nowadays you will hear this usage inconversation and will even see it in print, but it is still notacceptable in most writing.

Study the following options:people Instead of a person or someone, try people. . . they (which fits with they).

When people know what they want, theycan be firm.

a real person Better yet, use a true-to-life example, areal person.

My cousin Marc is very firm because heknows what he wants.

A real example not only makes thegrammar correct, but it is also much moreinteresting and memorable. A person andsomeone are nobodies.

he, he or she The old-fashioned pronoun choice toaccompany a person is he.

If a person is strong, he stands up for hisbeliefs, even when his friends disagree.

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But this choice presumes that a person ismale. It should be avoided because it issexist language. He or she is possible, butnot if it comes several times in a row; heor she, when repeated, becomes clunkyand awkward.

If a person is strong, he or she stands upfor his or her beliefs, even when his or herfriends disagree.

Avoid he/she and s/he.

I Don’t be afraid of I. It is very strong inwriting about emotions and experience.In these matters, being objective is not asgood as being truthful. As Thoreau wrote,“I should not talk so much about myselfif there were anybody else whom I knewas well.” A lot of times when yougeneralize, you really are writing fromexperience. If you speak for yourself,often you will get to the nitty-gritty of thesubject—what you know to be true.

If I were strong, I would stand up for mybeliefs, even when my friends disagree.

You don’t, however, need phrases like Ithink or in my opinion because the wholepaper is, after all, what you choose to say.

you You is good for giving directions andwriting letters. It establishes an intimatetone with your reader. For essays,however, it may seem too informal or toopreachy.

If you are strong, you stand up for yourbeliefs, even when your friends disagree.

Try we instead, when you mean people ingeneral.

If we are strong, we stand up for ourbeliefs, even when our friends disagree.

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In any case, beware of mixing pronouns.

Riding my bicycle is good for your legs.

one One means a person—singular. If you useit, you must stick with it.

If one is strong, one stands up for one’sbelief, even when one’s friends disagree.

One is an option for solving the he/sheproblem; it is appropriate for formalwriting. Nevertheless, when repeated, onecan sound stuffy. How many times canone say one before one makes oneselfsound silly?

we We can be used to mean people in general.

If we are strong, we stand up for ourbeliefs, even when our friends disagree.

Be careful that you mean more than justyourself. Using I might be moreappropriate.

they They is often the best solution to the he/sheproblem, but remember that they mustrefer to a plural, such as many people orsome people.

If people are strong, they stand up for theirbeliefs, even when their friends disagree.

no pronoun Often you can avoid the problem entirely.Instead of

A young person has to manage his or hertime well if he or she wants to get ahead.

write:

A young person has to manage time well toget ahead.

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CORRECT PRONOUNS

I, she, he, we, they, and who identify the persons doing the action.Me, her, him, us, them, and whom identify the persons receivingthe action.

Pairs: My Friends and I / My Friends and Me

• With a pair of people, try the sentence without the otherperson:

My friends and I saw the movie six times.(. . . I saw the movie, not Me saw the movie.)

Carter gave the tickets to my friends and me.(Carter gave the tickets to me, not to I.)

The same rule goes for him, her, he, she.

The friar mixed a potion for Romeo and her.(He mixed the potion for her, not for she.)

Note: Put yourself last in a list:

My brothers and I fought constantly.(Not Me and my brothers fought constantly.)

Beverly read her story to Noah, Hannah, and me.Don’t be afraid of me; it’s often right.

Between you and me, the jazz pianist should have won thecompetition.

(Not Between you and I . . .)

• Don’t use myself when me will do.

I painted the whole apartment myself.(Here, me cannot be substituted.)

Sam did the formatting for Toby and me.(Not . . . for Toby and myself.)

Never write themself; use themselves.

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Comparisons

• Use I, he, she, we, they when comparing with the subject ofthe sentence—usually the first person in the sentence.

Phil was more generous to Sarah than I was.Zachary is more nervous than she is.

Sometimes is is left off the end:

Zachary is more nervous than she.

• Use me, him, her, us, them when comparing with the receiver,the object of the sentence—usually the person mentionedlater in the sentence.

Phil was more generous to Sarah than to me.Note the difference:

He was nastier to Ramona than I.(He was nastier to Ramona than I was.)

He was nastier to Ramona than me.(He was nastier to Ramona than to me.)

Who/Whom

• Use whom after prepositions (to whom, of whom, for whom,from whom, with whom).

To whom should I address my complaint?

• Use who for subjects of verbs.

Who should I say is calling?When in doubt, use who.

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VAGUE PRONOUNS

Certain pronouns—which, it, this, that, and who—must refer to asingle word, not to a whole phrase. Keep them near the word theyrefer to.

These words are used loosely in conversation, but in mostwriting you should use them more precisely.

Which

Which causes the most trouble of the five. Don’t overuse it.

Imprecise: Last week I felt sick in which I didn’t even get togo to school.

Precise: Last week I felt sick. I didn’t even get to go toschool.

Precise: Last week I had a cold which kept me fromgoing to school.

In the last example, which clearly refers to cold.

Use in which only when you mean that one thing is inside theother:

The box in which I keep my jewelry fell apart.

Note that which normally cannot start a sentence unless it asks aquestion.

It

When you use it, make sure the reader knows what it is. It isoften weak at the start of a sentence when it refers to nothing.

Imprecise: Eleanore ate a big Chinese dinner and then hada chocolate milk shake for dessert. It made hersick.

Precise: Eleanore ate a big Chinese dinner and then hada chocolate milk shake for dessert. Thecombination made her sick.

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This

This cannot refer to a whole situation or a group of things, soinsert a word after this to sum up what this refers to.

Imprecise: Mr. Charles chats with his employees on theirfirst day of work, he helps them get started, andhe raises their pay after the first month. Thismakes a big difference.

Precise: Mr. Charles chats with his employees on theirfirst day of work, he helps them get started, andhe raises their pay after the first month. Thislevel of support makes a big difference.

That

Just like this, that cannot refer to a whole situation or a group ofthings. When that seems unclear, replace it with what it standsfor.

Imprecise: We are not paid well and receive inadequatebenefits, but I don’t think we should discuss thatyet.

The reader might ask, “Discuss what yet?”

Precise: We are not paid well and receive inadequatebenefits, but I don’t think we should discussbenefits yet.

Who

Use who for people—not which.

The runner who finished last got all the publicity.

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RECOGNIZING COMPLETE SENTENCES

At the heart of every sentence—no matter how complicated—is asubject-verb combination.

To recognize a complete sentence, you need to recognize its truesubject and verb.

■ SIMPLE SENTENCES

• A sentence always has a subject and a verb:

I won.Philippe snores.This soup is cold.

I, Philippe, soup are the subjects; won, snores, is are the verbs.Notice that the verb enables the subject to do or besomething.

These very short sentences have only a one-word subjectand a one-word verb.

• Usually a word or phrase completes the subject and verb:

Janeen walks three miles a day.Suzanne spent all of her savings.It’s not very difficult.She says absolutely nothing.They had headaches for two days.Robert is her latest fiancé.The “blow torch murders” were committed by the leastlikely suspect—the grandmother.High above the Kona coast in Hawaii stands one of theworld’s great chocolate plantations.

• Sentences can have more than one subject and more thanone verb:

Tracy and Pete have a new home. (two subjects)They bought an old house and restored it. (two verbs)

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• Sometimes the subject is understood to be “you,” the reader;the sentence is usually a command or a direction:

Avoid submerging this product in water.Walk two blocks past the traffic light.

• Sometimes a word or group of words introduces the mainpart of a sentence:

However, the bar is closed.For example, chemists write CO2 instead of carbondioxide.Then we drove a thousand miles.At the end of the game, the umpire and the pitcher got intoa fight.In the cabin by the lake, you’ll find the paddles and lifejackets.

For more information about recognizing subjects and verbs,see “Verb Agreement,” page 52.

■ COMPOUND OR COORDINATE

SENTENCES

Two complete sentences can be joined to make a compound, orcoordinate, sentence.

• Sometimes the two sentences are joined by a comma andone of the following connecting words:

and so or forbut yet nor

Janeen walks three miles a day, but she still eats junk food.Suzanne spent all of her savings, and now she has to startusing her credit cards.

• Sometimes the two sentences are connected by a semicolon.

Grasshoppers are lazy; they are not very hard to catch.

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■ COMPLEX OR SUBORDINATE SENTENCES

Sometimes a sentence has two parts—the main part (a completeshort sentence) and a subordinated part (a complete shortsentence preceded by a subordinating word, such as

because although if whereaswhen after since while

A subordinating word signals the start of half a sentence.

Suzanne has spent all of her savings because her brotheris ill.

Mona shouts when she talks on the telephone.

The primary market for sea urchins is Japan although theyare harvested in Maine.

Notice in the first sentence that “Suzanne has spent all of hersavings” could be a complete sentence. On the other hand,“because her brother is ill” is not complete by itself. In thesecond sentence, “when she talks on the telephone” is alsoincomplete. In the third sentence, “although they are harvestedin Maine” is incomplete.

The two parts of each sentence are reversible:

Because her brother is ill, Suzanne has spent all of hersavings.

When she talks on the telephone, Mona shouts.

Although sea urchins are harvested in Maine, the primarymarket is Japan.

A compound-complex sentence occurs when one or both halves ofa compound sentence have subordinated parts.

Suzanne always seemed to be a skinflint, but she hasspent all her savings because her brother is ill.

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PERIOD OR COMMA? RUN-ON

SENTENCES AND SENTENCE

FRAGMENTS

To decide whether to use a period or a comma, look at whatcomes before and after the punctuation.

Often you reach a pause in your writing, and you wonder, “DoI put a comma or a period?” The length of a sentence hasnothing to do with the right choice. You need to look at whatcomes before and after the punctuation to see whether you havetwo separate sentences or a single sentence with a fragmentattached to it.

■ RECOGNIZING RUN-ON

SENTENCES (COMMA SPLICES

AND FUSED SENTENCES)The most common run-on sentence happens when you havetwo complete sentences, but you have only a comma or nopunctuation between them. Run-ons usually occur because thetwo sentences are closely related. Run-on sentences aresometimes called comma splices (two sentences with only acomma between them) or fused sentences (two sentences with nopunctuation between them).

The two most common spots where run-ons occur are

• When a pronoun begins the second sentence:

Incorrect: The light floated toward us, it gave an eerieglow.

Correct: The light floated toward us. It gave an eerieglow.

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Incorrect: Ralph decided to move to Paris, he wanted tobe a writer.

Correct: Ralph decided to move to Paris. He wanted tobe a writer.

• When however begins the second sentence:

Incorrect: Mosquitoes in the United States are just anannoyance, however in many countries they area health hazard.

Correct: Mosquitoes in the United States are just anannoyance. However, in many countries they area health hazard.

How to Fix Run-on Sentences

Incorrect: I went to Gorman’s Ice Cream Parlor, I ordereda triple hot fudge sundae.

The bear got the reporter’s cellphone now hecan’t call in his story.

• The simplest way to fix a run-on sentence is to put a periodor semicolon between the two sentences:

Correct: I went to Gorman’s Ice Cream Parlor. I ordereda triple hot fudge sundae.

The bear got the reporter’s cellphone. Now hecan’t call in his story.

(Remember that it is perfectly correct to have two or threeshort sentences in a row.)

Correct: I went to Gorman’s Ice Cream Parlor; I ordereda triple hot fudge sundae.

The bear got the reporter’s cellphone; now hecan’t call in his story.

• Here are two other ways to fix run-on sentences:

Put a comma and a conjunction between the two sentences.The conjunctions are and, but, so, yet, for, or, and nor.

Correct: I went to Gorman’s Ice Cream Parlor, and Iordered a triple hot fudge sundae.

The bear got the reporter’s cellphone, so nowhe can’t call in his story.

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Use a subordinating word with one of the sentences:

Correct: I went to Gorman’s Ice Cream Parlor, where Iordered a triple hot fudge sundae.

Because the bear got the reporter’s cellphone,he can’t call in his story.

Other run-on sentences just go on and on, strung together withand and but. These need to be divided into two or more shortersentences.

■ RECOGNIZING SENTENCE FRAGMENTS

Many sentence fragments may appear to be complete sentences,but they have elements that make them incomplete.

Words That Rarely Begin Sentences

Certain words almost never begin sentences:

such as whichespecially whonot whose except in a questionlike, just like howthe same as what

In addition, if you have trouble with sentence fragments, it’sbest not to start sentences with and or but.

In most cases, put a comma or a dash before these words.

Incorrect: We had to drain the pipes after every vacation.Especially in the winter.

Correct: We had to drain the pipes after every vacation—especially in the winter.

Incorrect: They gave me one lousy dollar. Which was a fullday’s pay.

Correct: They gave me one lousy dollar, which was a fullday’s pay.

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Incorrect: N. C. Wyeth illustrated many children’s books.Such as Jules Verne’s The Mysterious Island.

Correct: N. C. Wyeth illustrated many children’s books,such as Jules Verne’s The Mysterious Island.

Subordinating Words

Certain words always begin half a sentence—either the first halfor the second half. These are called subordinating words:

when as if becausebefore while unless althoughafter since whereas even though

A sentence fragment frequently begins with a subordinatingword.

Incorrect: Although Janeen walks three miles a day.

When Archduke Franz Ferdinand wasassassinated in Sarajevo.

You can fix these fragments by connecting each fragment to thesentence before or after it.

Correct: Although Janeen walks three miles a day, shestill has to watch her diet.

Janeen still has to watch her diet although shewalks three miles a day.

When Archduke Franz Ferdinand wasassassinated in Sarajevo, the whole world wasplunged into war.

The whole world was plunged into war whenArchduke Franz Ferdinand was assassinated inSarajevo.

You can also drop the subordinating word.

Correct: Janeen walks three miles a day.

Archduke Franz Ferdinand was assassinated inSarajevo.

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A subtle point: Watch out for and. Putting and between afragment and a sentence doesn’t fix the fragment.

Still Although Janeen walks three miles a day andincorrect: she still watches her diet.

Correct: Although Janeen walks three miles a day andshe still watches her diet, she has not yetreached her goal.

Verbs Ending in -ing

Verbs ending in -ing cannot serve as the main verb of asentence:

Incorrect: The boys ran toward the ocean. Leaping acrossthe hot sand.

I have three good friends. One being my cousin.

I love walking in the evening and taking innature’s beauty. The sun setting over the prairie.

The wind blowing the tall grass.

One solution is to connect the fragment to the precedingsentence.

Correct: The boys ran toward the ocean, leaping acrossthe hot sand.

I love walking in the evening and taking innature’s beauty—the sun setting over the prairieand the wind blowing the tall grass.

The second solution is to change the -ing verb to a completeverb.

Correct: They leaped across the hot sand.

One is my cousin.

An -ing verb can begin a sentence if a complete verb comes later.

Correct: Leaping across the hot sand hurts my feet.

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To Verbs

To verbs (to be, to feel) also frequently begin fragments.

Incorrect: I went back home to talk to my father. To tell himhow I felt.

Keep the hairdryer away from the sink. To avoidsubmersion in water.

Fix these fragments by connecting them to the sentence beforeor by adding a subject and verb:

Correct: I went back home to talk to my father, to tell himhow I felt.

I went back home to talk to my father. I neededto tell him how I felt.

Keep the hairdryer away from the sink to avoidsubmersion in water.

Keep the hairdryer away from the sink. You mustavoid submerging it in water.

A to verb can begin a sentence if a complete verb comes later.

Correct: To talk to my father always calms me down.

Repeated Words

A repeated word can create a fragment.

Incorrect: Elizabeth’s the ideal cat. A cat who both playsand purrs.

I believe that Whitman is our greatest poet. Thathe singlehandedly began modern Americanpoetry.

The best solution here is to replace the period with a comma.

Correct: Elizabeth’s the ideal cat, a cat who both playsand purrs.

I believe that Whitman is our greatest poet, thathe singlehandedly began modern Americanpoetry.

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Note: That rarely begins a sentence, except when it points, as in“That was the year of the great flood.”

Using Fragments for Style

You will notice that professional writers sometimes usesentence fragments for emphasis or style. Be sure you havecontrol over fragments before you experiment. In the right spot,a fragment can be very strong.

USING BUT, HOWEVER, ALTHOUGH

These three words are used to reverse the meaning of asentence, but they are punctuated differently.These three words are used to reverse the meaning of asentence; however, they are punctuated differently.These three words are used to reverse the meaning of asentence although they are punctuated differently.

For further options in using however, see pages 39 and 41.For further options in using although, see pages 30 and 34–35.

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COMMAS

More errors come from having too many commas than from havingtoo few. Here are five places you need them.

Comma before

but and so yetor for nor

When one of these words connects two sentences, put a commabefore it.

The lead actor was on crutches, but the show went on.

Gina intended to win the weight-lifting pageant, and that’sexactly what she did.

The house didn’t sell at $300,000, so they lowered theprice.

However, don’t automatically stick in a comma just because asentence is long.

No one at the paint factory could have guessed that theboss would one day be a famous writer.

Commas in a List or Series

Use commas between parts of a series of three or more.

In one month the game farm saved the lives of a red fox, agreat-horned owl, and a black bear cub.

Greg climbed the ladder, marched to the end of the diving board, took a big spring, and came down in a belly bust.

In the class sat a bearded man, a police officer, a womaneating a sandwich, and a parakeet.

(Without the last comma, what happens to the parakeet?) Don’t use a comma in a pair.

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In one month the game farm saved the lives of a red foxand a great-horned owl.

Mary Ellen’s mother handed out hard candies and made ussit while she played Mozart’s “Turkish March” on the piano.

Comma after a Lead-in

Use a comma after an introductory part of a sentence.

Sometimes the lead-in is just a word or a phrase.

However, the truth finally came out.

For example, you can learn how to fix a leaky faucet.

After lunch, she gave me a cup of that terrible herb tea.

Sometimes the lead-in is an entire clause that begins with asubordinating word (such as when, after, if, because, or although).In this case, the comma comes at the turning point of thesentence.

When James walked through the front door, the wholefamily was laughing hysterically.

If one of the brain’s two hemispheres is damaged early inlife, the healthy one often takes on the functions of both.

A Pair of Commas around an Insertion

Surround an insertion or interruption with a pair of commas.Both commas are necessary.

The truth, however, finally came out.

Mary Cassat, an American, lived and painted in Paris formost of her life.

My cousin, who thinks she is always right, was dead wrong.

Ed, even though no one invited him, arrived first at the party.

Places and dates are treated as insertions. Note especially thatcommas surround the year and the state.

The hospital was in Oshkosh, Wisconsin, not far fromOmro.

I was born on August 15, 1984, at seven in the morning.

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Commas with Quotations Marks

Use a comma after said and similar words (asked, wrote) before aquotation.

Socrates said, “Know thyself.”

A comma, if needed, goes inside quotation marks after a title.

In “The Raven,” by Edgar Allan Poe, the bird gradually takeson more and more meaning for the narrator.

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SEMICOLONS

Semicolons can be used instead of periods; they also canseparate parts of a complicated list.

• Use a semicolon to connect two related sentences; each halfmust be a complete sentence.

Ask for what you want; accept what you get.

One day she says she’s at death’s door; the next day she’sready to rock and roll.

I’ll never forget the night of the circus; that’s when I metthe trapeze artist who changed my life.

It’s not that O’Hara’s position is wrong; it’s that he missesthe key point.

A semicolon often comes before certain transition words; acomma follows the transition.

however therefore otherwisenevertheless in other words insteadfor example on the other hand meanwhilebesides furthermore unfortunately

Schubert was a great composer; however, Beethoven wasgreater.

The bank lost two of my deposits; therefore, I am closingmy account.

Semicolons work best when used to emphasize a strongconnection between the two sentences.

• Use semicolons instead of commas in a list when some ofthe parts already have commas.

As a child, what your friends have, you want to have; whatthey do, you want to do; and where they go, you want togo.

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COLONS

Colons create suspense: they signal that an example, a quotation,or an explanation will follow.

Use a colon after a complete sentence to introduce relateddetails.

Before a colon you must have a complete statement. Don’t use acolon after are or include or such as.

Colons can introduce

• A list

First, you need the basic supplies: a tent, a sleeping bag, acooking kit, and a backpack.

• A quotation

The author begins with a shocker: “Mother spent hersummer sitting naked on a rock.”

• An example

Vegetarians often use legumes: for example, beans orlentils.

• An emphatic assertion

This is the bottom line: I refuse to work for less than$10.00 an hour.

• A subtitle

Rules of Thumb: A Guide for Writers

When you type, leave one space after a colon.

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DASHES AND PARENTHESES

Dashes and parentheses separate a word or remark from the restof the sentence.

■ DASHES

Dashes highlight the part of the sentence they separate, or showan abrupt change of thought in midsentence, or connect afragment to a sentence.

Alberta Hunter—still singing at the age of eighty—performednightly at The Cookery in New York City.

At night the forest is magical and fascinating—and yet itterrifies me.

Living the high life—that’s what I want.

Dashes are very handy; they can replace a period, comma,colon, or semicolon. However, they are usually informal, sodon’t use many—or you will seem to have dashed off yourpaper.

When you type, two hyphens make a dash; there is no spacebefore or after the dash. (Computers now can be set to providea true “em dash.”)

■ PARENTHESES

Parentheses deemphasize the words they separate. Use them toenclose brief explanations or interruptions. They can containeither part of a sentence or a whole sentence.

I demanded reasonable working hours (nine to five), andthey met my request.

Bergman’s last film disappointed the critics. (See theattached reviews.)

Mayme drives slowly (she claims her car won’t go over fortymiles per hour), so she gets tickets for causing traffic jams.

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• Put any necessary punctuation after the second parenthesisif the parentheses contain part of a sentence.

• If the parentheses contain a complete sentence, put theperiod inside the second parenthesis. Notice, however, thatyou don’t capitalize or use a period when parenthesesenclose a sentence within a sentence.

Be sparing with parentheses. Too many can chop up yoursentences.

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QUOTATION MARKS

Use quotation marks any time you use someone else’s exactwords. If they are not the exact words, don’t surround them withquotation marks.

Quotations in this chapter come from the following selectionfrom Mark Twain’s Adventures of Huckleberry Finn:

Sometimes we’d have the whole river all toourselves for the longest time. Yonder was thebanks and the islands, across the water; andmaybe a spark—which was a candle in a cabinwindow—and sometimes on the water you couldsee a spark or two—on a raft or a scow, you know;and maybe you could hear a fiddle or a songcoming over from one of them crafts. It’s lovely tolive on a raft.

Punctuation before a Quotation

Here are three ways to lead into a quotation:

• For short quotations (a word or a phrase), don’t use Twainsays, and don’t put a comma before the quotation. Simplyuse the writer’s phrase as it fits smoothly into your sentence:

Huck Finn finds it “lovely” to float down the MississippiRiver on a raft.

• Put a comma before the quotation marks if you use he says.

Huck says, “It’s lovely to live on a raft.”

Put no comma before the quotation marks if you use he saysthat.

Huck says that “It’s lovely to live on a raft.”

• Use a colon (:) before a quotation of a sentence or more. Besure you have a complete statement before the colon. Don’tuse he says.

In one short sentence, Twain pulls together the wholeparagraph: “It’s lovely to live on a raft.”

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Punctuation after a Quotation

At the end of a quotation, the period or comma goes inside thequotation marks. Do not close the quotation marks until theperson’s words end. Use one mark of punctuation to end yoursentence—never two periods or a comma and a period.

Twain writes, “you could hear a fiddle or a song comingover from one of them crafts. It’s lovely to live on a raft.”

Semicolons go outside of closing quotation marks.

Huck says, “It’s lovely to live on a raft”; however, this rafteventually drifts him into trouble.

Question marks and exclamation marks go inside if the personyou are writing about is asking or exclaiming. (If you are askingor exclaiming, the mark goes outside.)

“Have you read Huckleberry Finn?” she asked.Did Twain call Huck’s life “lovely”?

When your quotation is more than a few words, let thequotation end your sentence. Otherwise you’re liable to get atangled sentence.

Tangled: Huck says, “It’s lovely to live on a raft” illustrateshis love of freedom.

Correct: Huck says, “It’s lovely to live on a raft.” Thisquotation illustrates his love of freedom.

(See pages 105 and 132 for a discussion of punctuation afterquotations in research papers.)

Indenting Long Quotations

Long quotations (three or more lines) do not get quotationmarks. Instead, start on a new line and indent the whole leftmargin of the quotation ten spaces. After the quotation, returnto the original margin and continue your paragraph.

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Huck and Jim lead a life of ease:Sometimes we’d have the whole river all toourselves for the longest time. Yonder was thebanks and the islands, across the water; andmaybe a spark—which was a candle in a cabinwindow—and sometimes on the water you couldsee a spark or two—on a raft or a scow, youknow; and maybe you could hear a fiddle or asong coming over from one of them crafts. It’slovely to live on a raft.

Brackets indicate that you have added or changed a word tomake the quotation clear.

An ellipsis (three periods separated by spaces) indicates thatyou have left out words from the original quotation. Use afourth period to end your sentence.

Sometimes we’d have that whole river [the Mississippi] all to ourselves for the longest time. . . . It’s lovely to liveon a raft.

You don’t need an ellipsis at the beginning or end of aquotation, only when omitting words from the middle or end.

Dialogue

In dialogue, start a new paragraph every time you switch fromone speaker to the other.

“Did you enjoy reading Huckleberry Finn?” askedProfessor Migliaccio.

“I guess so,” Joylene said, “but the grammar is awful.”The professor thought a moment. “You know, the book

was once banned in Boston because of that. I guessTwain’s experiment still has some shock value.”

“Well, it shocked me,” said Joylene. “I can’t believe aneducated man would write that way.”

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Writing about a Word or Phrase

When you discuss a word or phrase, surround it with quotationmarks.

The name “Mark Twain” means “two fathoms deep.”Advertisers use “America,” while news reporters refer to“the United States.”

Do not use quotation marks around slang; either use the wordwithout quotation marks or find a better word.

Quotation within a Quotation

For quotations within a quotation, use single quotation marks:

According to radio announcer Rhingo Lake, “The jockeyclearly screamed ‘I’ve been foiled!’ as the horse fell to theground right before the finish line.”

Quoting Poetry

For poetry, when quoting two or more lines, indent ten spacesfrom the left margin and copy the lines of poetry exactly as thepoet arranged them.

We are such stuffAs dreams are made on; and our little lifeIs rounded with a sleep.

When a line of poetry is too long to fit on a line of your paper,indent the turnover line an additional three spaces, as in thefollowing line from Walt Whitman’s Leaves of Grass.

I believe that a leaf of grass is no less than the journeyworkof the stars.

When quoting a few words of poetry that include a line break,use a slash mark to show where the poet’s line ends.

In The Tempest, Shakespeare calls us “such stuff / Asdreams are made on.”

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TITLES: UNDERLINES, ITALICS, OR QUOTATION MARKS

Underline or italicize titles of longer works and use quotation marksfor titles of shorter works.

• Underline or italicize titles of longer works that arepublished separately such as books, magazines, plays,newspapers, movies, television programs, and websites.

War and Peace NewsweekNew York Times on the Web The Wizard of Oz

Underlining and italics are equivalent, but don’t mix themin your paper. For MLA research style, you shouldunderline; for APA or Chicago style or for posting a paperonline, you should italicize.

• Put “quotation marks” around titles of shorter works thatare found within larger works such as articles, short stories,poems, songs, and chapters.

“The Star-Spangled Banner”“The Pit and the Pendulum”

Remember that a comma or period, if needed, goes insidethe quotation marks.

In “Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening,” Robert Frostuses an intricate rhyme scheme.

• Do not underline or place quotation marks around your titleon a cover sheet—unless your title contains someone else’stitle.

My Week on a Shrimp Boat

An Analysis of T. S. Eliot’s “The Love Song of J. AlfredPrufrock”

The Vision of War in The Red Badge of Courage

• Capitalize only the first word and all major words in a title.

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SHIFTING VERB TENSES

Sometimes you may find yourself slipping back and forth betweenpresent and past verb tenses. Be consistent, especially withineach paragraph.

Present Tense for Literature

Use the present tense for writing about literature, film, and thearts.

Scarlett comes into the room and pulls down the draperies.

Hamlet speaks with irony even about death.

Use the present tense for a critic’s ideas.

Auerbach compares selections from the Odyssey and theBible.

Past Tense for True Stories

Use the simple past tense to tell your own stories or stories fromhistory.

On a dare, I jumped off the back of the garage.

President Truman waved from the caboose.

Troublesome Verbs

Had

Many people use had when they don’t need it. Use had to referto events that were already finished when your story orexample took place—the past before the past that you’redescribing. To check, try adding previously or already next to had.

In 1986, we moved to New York. We had lived in Floridafor three years.

If I had known about tsetse flies, I would have been muchmore cautious.

Would

• Use would for something that happened regularly during aperiod of the past.

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In the early days of automobiles, tires frequently wouldblow out.

• Use would when writing in the past tense and referring tosomething that at that time was projected for the future.

The producer promised his niece that she would get thelead in the movie. (Not she will get the lead)

• Use would for hypothetical situations.

Elaine would have preferred to stay home.

If Jack had called two minutes sooner, Elaine wouldn’t bein Japan right now.

If Jack were more responsible, he would think ahead.

(Use were with a singular subject after if or as though.)

Could, Can

Use could to refer to the past and can to refer to the present.

Past: The engineer couldn’t run the experimentbecause the ocean was too rough.

Present: The engineer cannot run the experimentbecause the ocean is too rough.

Use could to show what might happen and doesn’t; use can toshow ability.

My parents make good money. They could buy us anythingwe want, but they don’t.

My parents make good money. They can buy us anythingwe want.

Gone, Eaten, Done, Seen, Written

Avoid expressions such as I seen and He has went. Use gone,eaten, done, seen, written after a helping verb.

We went. We have gone.

I ate. I have eaten.

He did it. He has done it.

He saw the light. He has seen the light.

She wrote for an hour. She has written for an hour.

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VERB AGREEMENT

The word before the verb is not always its subject. Look for who orwhat is doing the action.

• Remember that two singular subjects joined by and (forexample, the bird and the bee) make a plural and need aplural verb.

The bird and the bee make music together.My great aunt and my grandfather argue incessantly.

• Sometimes an insertion separates the subject and verb.

The drummer, not the other musicians, sets the rhythm.Two causes for the collapse of their business wereemployee apathy and management dishonesty.

• Sometimes an of phrase separates the subject and verb; readthe sentence without the of phrase.

One of the guests was a sleepwalker.Each of us owns a Wurlitzer jukebox.The use of cigarettes is dangerous.

• The subject of the sentence follows there was, there were, thereis, there are.

There was one reason for the cover-up.There were three reasons for the cover-up.

• Words with one and body are singular.

Everyone except for the twins was laughing.Somebody always overheats the copying machine.

• Sometimes a group can be singular.

My family does not eat crowder peas.In some states the jury elects the foreman.A thousand dollars is a lot of money to carry around.

• -ing phrases are usually singular.

Dating two people is tricky.

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WORD ENDINGS: S AND ED

If word endings give you problems, train yourself to check everynoun to see if it needs s and every verb to see if it needs s or ed.

Add ed

• To form most simple past tenses

She walked. He tripped. Mae asked a question.

• After has, have, had

He has walked. We have moved. She had alreadyarrived.

• After the be verbs (are, were, is, was, am, be, been, being)

They are prejudiced against immigrants.She was depressed.Marge is engaged to be married.

Note that the -ed ending can sometimes appear in present andfuture tenses:

They are supposed to leave on Friday.He will be prepared.

Do Not Add ed

• After to

He loved to walk in the early morning.

• After would, should, could

Sometimes she would work all night.Charles Atlas could lift two hundred pounds.

• After did, didn’t

Harpo didn’t talk often.

• After an irregular past tense

I bought bread. She found her keys.The cup fell. The shoes cost only seven dollars.

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Add s

• To form a plural (more than one)

many scientists two potatoes several families

• To the present tense of a verb that follows he, she, it, or asingular noun

The system costs too much. It appears every spring.She says what she thinks. The dog sees the fire

hydrant.Bill asks provocative questions. Polly insists on her rights.

Note: Usually when there is an s on the noun, there is no son the verb.

Pots rattle. A pot rattles.The candles burn swiftly. The candle burns swiftly.

• To form a possessive (with an apostrophe)

John’s mother today’s societySally’s house women’s clothing

Do Not Add s to a Verb

• If the subject of the sentence is plural

Tulips come from Holland.Salt and sugar look the same.

• If one of these helping verbs comes before the main verb

does may will shall canmust might would should could

Kenneth should clean out the backseat of his car.Angelica can get there in thirty minutes.The professor’s attitude does make me angry.

For more help with word endings, see pages 13–14, 20, and 52.

TANGLED SENTENCES

Look at your sentences to make sure the parts go with each other.

■ PARALLEL STRUCTURE

The parts of a list (or pair) must be in the same format.

Not parallel: Lord Byron’s travels took him to France,

Switzerland, Italy, and to Greece.

Here, two of the countries have to before them and two do not.The word to must be used either before every item or beforeonly the first.

Correct: Lord Byron’s travels took him to France, toSwitzerland, to Italy, and to Greece.

Correct: Lord Byron’s travels took him to France,Switzerland, Italy, and Greece.

Not parallel: To reach the camp, Marty paddled a canoe and

then a horse.

Here, it sounds as if Marty paddled a horse.

Correct: To reach the camp, Marty paddled a canoe andthen rode a horse.

Not parallel: George Orwell hated his school because of the

living conditions, the punishments, and theteachers only drilled facts into the students.

Here the first two parts of the list are nouns, but the third part isa whole clause.

Correct: George Orwell hated his school because theliving conditions were disgusting, thepunishments were cruel, and the teachers onlydrilled facts into the students.

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■ DANGLERS

• There are two problems. In one, a word (often a pronoun)has been left out, so that the introductory phrase doesn’t fitwith what follows.

Dangler: Dashing wildly across the platform, the trainpulled out of the station.

This sounds as if the train dashed across the platform. Tocorrect it, add the missing word or words.

Correct: Dashing wildly across the platform, we saw thetrain pull out of the station.

Correct: As we dashed wildly across the platform, thetrain pulled out of the station.

Dangler: At the age of five, my mother took me to schoolfor the first time.

Technically, this sentence says that the mother was five.

Correct: When I was five, my mother took me to schoolfor the first time.

• The second problem occurs when a phrase or word in asentence is too far from the part it goes with.

Dangler: A former weight lifter, the reporter interviewedTerrence Harley about the use of steroids.

This sounds as if the reporter is a former weightlifter.

Correct: The reporter interviewed Terrence Harley, aformer weight lifter, about the use of steroids.

■ MIXED SENTENCE PATTERNS

Sometimes you start with one way of getting to a point, but oneof the words slides you into a different way of saying it. Thetwo patterns get mixed up. Correct a mixed sentence by usingone pattern or the other.

Mixed (incorrect): By opening the window lets in fresh air.

Here the writer started to say “By opening the window, I let infresh air,” but the phrase opening the window took over.

Correct: By opening the window, I let in fresh air.

Correct: Opening the window lets in fresh air.

Read your sentence as a whole to make sure that the end goeswith the beginning.

Mixed (incorrect): In the Republic of Cameroon has more than

two hundred local languages.

Correct: The Republic of Cameroon has more than twohundred local languages.

Correct: In the Republic of Cameroon, more than twohundred local languages are spoken.

Mixed (incorrect): In “London,” by William Blake presents a

critique of the modern city.

Correct: In “London,” William Blake presents a critiqueof the modern city.

Correct: “London,” by William Blake, presents a critiqueof the modern city.

Note that these problem sentences most often begin with by or in.

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PART

PUTTING A PAPERTOGETHERWhat to Do When You’re StuckAddressing Your AudienceWriting with a ThesisFinding an Organization for Your EssayIntroductionsParagraphs—Long and ShortTransitionsIncorporating QuotationsConclusionsHow to Make a Paper Longer (and When to Make It Shorter)How to Work on a Second DraftShortcuts for “Word”Proofreading TipsFormat of College Papers

Special Case: Writing an Essay in ClassSpecial Case: Writing about Literature

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WHAT TO DO WHEN YOU’RE STUCK

Sometimes the ideas don’t seem to be there, or you have onlytwo ideas, or your thoughts are disconnected and jumbled.Sometimes it’s hard to know where to begin or what shape yourwriting should take.

Here are some techniques used by professional writers. Tryseveral—some are better for particular kinds of writing. Forinstance, lists and outlines work when you don’t have muchtime (in an essay exam) or when you have many points toinclude. Freewriting works well when your topic is subtle,when you want to write with depth. You’ll find severaltechniques that work for you.

■ TECHNIQUES THAT WORK

Break the Assignment into Easy Steps

You can take an intimidating assignment one step at a time.Start where you’re most comfortable. Often, once you havesome ideas written, one will lead to another, and you’ll have awhole draft of your paper. Otherwise, by trying several of thefollowing techniques, you may find that your paper is partlywritten and you have a clear sense of how to finish it.

Freewriting

In this method, you find your ideas by writing with no plan,quickly, without stopping. Don’t worry about what to say first.Start somewhere in the middle. Just write nonstop for ten totwenty minutes. Ignore grammar, spelling, organization. Followyour thoughts as they come. Above all, don’t stop! If you hit ablank place, write your last word over and over—you’ll soonhave a new idea. After you have freewritten several times, readwhat you’ve written and underline the good sentences. Thesecan be the heart of your essay. Freewriting takes time, but it isthe easiest way to begin and leads to surprising and creativeresults.

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Lists and Outlines

With this method, before you write any sentences, you make alist of the points you might use in your essay, including anyexamples and details that come to mind. Jot them down briefly,a word or phrase for each item. Keeping these points briefmakes them easier to read and rearrange. Include any ideas youthink of in one long list down the page. When you run dry, waita little—more ideas will come.

Now start grouping the items on the list. If you work on acomputer, move related points together; if you are writing byhand, draw lines connecting examples to the points theyillustrate. Then make a new list with the related points groupedtogether. Decide which idea is most important and cross outideas or details that do not relate to it. Arrange your points sothat each will lead up to the next. Be sure each section of youressay has examples or facts to strengthen your ideas.

You’re ready to compose your paper. You’ll see that this systemworks best when you have a big topic with many details.Although it seems complicated, it actually saves time. Once youhave your plan, the writing of the essay will go very fast.

Writing a Short Draft First

In one page, write your ideas for the assignment, what you’vethought of including. Take just ten or twenty minutes. Now youhave a draft to work with. Expand each point with explanationsor examples.

A similar technique is to write just one paragraph—at least sixsentences—that tells the main ideas you have in mind. Arrangethe sentences in a logical and effective sequence. Then copyeach sentence from that core paragraph onto its own page andwrite a paragraph or two to back up each sentence. Now youhave the rough draft of an essay. Remember, your first draftdoesn’t have to be perfect as long as it’s good enough for you towork with.

Using a Tape Recorder

If you have trouble writing as fast as you think, talk your ideasinto a recorder. Play them back several times, stopping to write

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down the best sentences. Another method is to write down fouror five sentences before you begin, each starting with the mainword of your topic, each different from the others. As you talk,use these sentences to get going when you run dry and to makesure you discuss different aspects of your topic.

Taking a Thirty-Minute Break

Go for a walk, listen to music, meditate, work out—whateverrefreshes your mind without dulling it. Forget about your paperfor half an hour.

Talking to a Friend

The idea here is for your friend to help you discover andorganize your ideas—not to tell you his or her ideas. The bestperson for this technique is not necessarily a good writer but agood listener. Ask your friend just to listen and not sayanything for a few minutes. As you talk, you should jot downpoints you make. Then ask what came across most vividly. Asyour friend responds, you may find yourself saying more,trying to make a point clearer. Make notes of the new points,but don’t let your friend write or dictate words for you. Onceyou have plenty of notes, you’re ready to be alone and tofreewrite or outline.

■ TIME WASTERS: WHAT NOT TO DO

Don’t Start Over Repeatedly

Keep going straight ahead. Write a complete first draft beforemaking major revisions. When an idea comes to you out ofsequence, jot it on a separate page.

Don’t Use a Dictionary or Thesaurus before the Second Draft

Delay your concern for precise word usage and spelling untilyou have the whole paper written. Then go back and makeimprovements.

Don’t Spend Hours on an Outline

You will probably revise your outline after the first draft, sodon’t get bogged down at the beginning. Even with long

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papers, a topic outline (naming the idea for each paragraphwithout supporting details) is often an efficient way toorganize.

Don’t Try to Make Only One Draft

You may think you can save time by writing only one draft, butyou can’t get everything perfect the first time. Actually, it’sfaster to write something approximately close to the points youwant to make, then go back and revise.

Don’t Write with Distractions

When you write, you need to focus your physical and mentalenergy. You can be distracted by music, television, orconversation in the background or by being too uncomfortableor too comfortable. You may not even realize how much thesedistractions can diffuse your energy and concentration.

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ADDRESSING YOUR AUDIENCE

Before you get very far into writing anything, stop and askyourself, Who is going to read this? Considering your audiencewill guide you in several crucial decisions.

Tone Decide how formal or informal you should be.

• Can you be playful or should you be straightforward andserious?

• Should you include personal experiences?

• Can you use I? I is usually preferable—it is more direct andmore graceful than avoiding I—but you do not have to keepsaying I think or In my opinion.

For most audiences, avoid being cute, sarcastic, or slangy; butalso avoid being stiff and artificial.

Level of Information Think about what your audiencealready knows about this topic.

• What can you skip or sum up quickly?

• What must you explain?

For example, a research paper about squid will be very differentin English 101 than in a marine biology course.

You will need to explain points or terms your audience may notbe familiar with. But you must be careful not to fill your paperwith tedious information most people already know.

Persuasion Consider your audience’s assumptions about thesubject and about the position you plan to take.

• What opening will engage their interest?

• What opinions on the subject may this audience already have?

• Which arguments, which evidence will best make your casefor this specific audience?

Answer the questions you feel certain they will have and findstrong counterarguments to support your own position.

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The Teacher as Audience

You write best if you write with authority—if you know whatyou’re talking about. But in most college writing, the teacher isthe authority. Often, students feel intimidated and merely try toguess what the teacher wants. Instead, look for issues that arereal to you, aspects of the subject that you’ve considered in thepast, aspects of the subject that you respond to strongly.Articulate these ideas and responses, but present them in a waythat will share them with your teacher and that build on whatyou have learned in class.

In some writing classes, your audience also includes yourclassmates. You can imagine yourself reading your paper aloudto a group of them. Imagining faces as you write can inspireyou to say what you most care about.

Writing in Your Profession

For a business or other professional audience, there areadditional requirements to consider. Above all, don’t wasteyour reader’s time!

• Put the main point up front and highlight the importantfacts.

• Be very direct and clear—rather than subtly building up toyour point.

• Use professional terminology when necessary, but avoidany unnecessary jargon.

• Avoid lengthy examples.

One caution: you don’t know who will end up reading a letteror report. On the Internet a document may be forwarded tomany thousands of people. Bear in mind the secondaryaudience—in some cases, your writing could even becomeevidence in a court of law.

When you don’t have a clear sense of your audience, imaginepeople in front of you (make it a large group) and the questionsthey might ask about your topic. Answer those questions onpaper and you will be aiming your essay right at a generalaudience—the audience most essays are written for.

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WRITING WITH A THESIS

Your thesis is the point of your paper—the point you aredemonstrating or proving. It can be stated in a sentence, thethesis sentence, that sums up your whole essay and states itspurpose. Nearly all college writing sets out to persuade thereader of an idea: that idea is the thesis you are presenting.

When You Know Your Thesis

Sometimes you know exactly what you want to show thereader, the point you want to make. In that case, you shouldline up your evidence and your reasoning. What do you need toexplain to make your point understandable? What argumentsmight be used against your point? How would you respond tothem?

Be prepared to revise your thesis. As you present evidence, youmay discover that your original formulation is not exactly whatyou mean or that you need to modify it to be more truthful. Goback and build your essay toward your new, more accuratethesis.

When You Don’t Know Your Thesis

Often you have a general topic, but no point you are trying toprove. Three questions might be helpful:

• What do I find important about this topic?

• What do my examples prove?

• What have I read or heard that I disagree with?

Based on these questions, write a hypothesis—a preliminarythesis. Then go ahead and write a draft of your paper.Frequently, you discover what all the details mean only afteryou’ve written them out and examined them. In the process ofwriting, you will clarify just what you want the paper to showand can then rewrite it, cutting out ideas that no longer fit andstrengthening the support for your real thesis.

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Phrasing Your Thesis

Most college papers state the thesis in a single sentence.(Occasionally, the thesis requires two sentences.) Your thesissentence should not simply state the general topic or the partsof your paper. You need to take a stand—state a position youintend to prove.

The seeds of World War II were sown at the end of WorldWar I.

Misreading the patient’s symptoms can lead to disaster,even death.

• Usually, the thesis is a simple sentence.

Jazz is a metaphor for the American experience.

• The thesis may be a complex sentence that ties together twoideas.

When shopping malls replaced downtown stores, theeconomy of inner cities declined.

• The thesis may include a list.

The cellphone has changed the style and content ofcommunications: in the business world, in families, andeven in foreign relations.

As you write your paper, keep improving your thesis statementby narrowing it, making it more specific, more accurate.

Where to State Your Thesis

Feature your thesis where it will have the most impact. In mostcollege essays, state your thesis in a sentence or two near thebeginning of the essay—in either the first or second paragraph.

Here are five approaches to positioning your thesis sentence:

• First introduce the general topic or problem and then stateyour position. (This is the method most often used incollege essays.)

• Start right out with a bold statement of your position.

• Begin with a brief story that sets up your thesis.

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• Position your thesis at the end of your essay. Some essaysbuild up to their thesis. They begin with a question, look atdifferent sides of the question, and draw a conclusion (athesis).

• Tell the story of how you reached your thesis—explainingyour original idea, telling how you learned more about thesubject, and leading up to your final position.

When the thesis is not in the beginning of your paper, makesure that the phrasing is particularly sharp and clear. Don’tbury your thesis!

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FINDING AN ORGANIZATION

FOR YOUR ESSAY

Your goal in organizing is to produce a sequence of paragraphsthat leads the reader to a single strong conclusion. But there aremany ways to reach this goal.

Some people need an outline; others write first and thenreorganize when they see a pattern in their writing. Still othersbegin in the middle or write the parts of their papers out oforder.

No method is the “right” one. Some approaches are better forcertain topics; some are better for certain people. Do not feelthat you have to fit into a set way of working.

Using a Formula as a Plan

Sometimes a teacher will give you a specific format to follow,but most of the time you will need to discover the organizationthat best enhances the content of your essay. A formula isespecially useful for assignments you must do repeatedly orquickly. For instance, lab reports usually follow a set format: (1) Question to Be Investigated; (2) The Experiment; (3) Observations; (4) Conclusions. Some topics lend themselvesto particular arrangements. Here are a few:

Common Patterns of Organization

chronological (the sequence in which events occurred)narrative (how you learned what you know)generalization, followed by examples or argumentsprocess (the steps for how something is done)comparison (similarities and differences)classification (types and categories)problem and solutioncause and effect (or a result and its causes)a brief case study or story, followed by interpretation of what

it showsdramatic order (building to the strongest point)

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If what you want to say fits one of these patterns, you canorganize your paper efficiently. However, formulas quite oftencreate boring papers. For most topics you will need to discoverthe best plan by making lists of ideas and reordering them or bywriting for a while and then reworking what you’ve written.

Creating a Rough Outline

Here’s a method that works for many writers:

• Make a random list—written in phrases, not sentences—ofall the ideas and facts you want to include. Don’t be stingy.Make a long list.

• Now look at your list and decide which are your mainpoints and which points support them.

• Write a sentence that contains the major point you are going tomake. Make sure that this point is stated early in your essay.

• Decide on the order of your main points.

• Delete points from your list that do not fit the pattern orplan you are using. Remember, you can’t put in everythingyou know.

• Decide on your paragraphs; write a sentence for eachparagraph that tells what you plan to say.

• Now write a rough draft before you reconsider yourorganization.

When to Adjust Your Plan

Sometimes the trick to good organization is reorganization. Nomatter whether you start with an outline, no matter what youthink when you begin, your topic may well shift and change asyou write. Often you will come up with better ideas, and as aresult, you may change your emphasis. Therefore, you must beready to abandon parts or all of your original plan. Some minorpoints may now become major points. Most writers need torevise their plan after they finish a first draft.

Here are the signs that a paper needs to be reorganized:

• Parts of the paper are boring.

• Your real point doesn’t show up until the end.

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• You have repeated the same idea in several different places.

• The essay seems choppy and hard to follow.

• Your paragraphs are either too short or too long.

In the end, make sure that you know the main point you wantthe reader to get and that every sentence contributes to makingthat point clear.

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INTRODUCTIONS

Beginnings demand special attention. An introduction shouldsnag your reader’s interest. Pretend that you are a readerleafing through a magazine: what opening would make youstop and read an article on your topic?

Sometimes you may get stuck writing an introduction. In thatcase, try writing your introduction after you’ve written the restof the first draft. Often you don’t find your real main point untilyou’ve written several pages. However, in an essay exam orunder time pressure, write the introduction first to indicate themap of the paper.

Here are a few common methods for beginning an essay:

Indicate the Parts of Your Essay

In many academic papers and in technical or business reports,the introduction should indicate what is coming. Write a briefparagraph summing up the points you plan to make, one at atime. Then, in the middle of your paper, develop each point intoone or more paragraphs.

Three factors caused the sudden population increase ineighteenth-century Europe. First, the newly settled coloniesprovided enough wealth to support more people. Second,eighteenth-century wars did not kill as many Europeans asdid seventeenth-century wars. Finally, the discovery of thepotato provided a cheap food source.

Sometimes you can indicate the parts of your essay more subtly:

Although Walden and Adventures of Huckleberry Finntreat similar themes, the two books have very differenttones and implications.

Take a Bold Stand

Start out with a strong statement of your position.

Millard Filmore is the most underrated President inAmerican history.

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Start with the Other Side

Tell what you disagree with and who said it. Give the opposingreasons so that you can later prove them wrong. For examplesof this technique, see the editorial or “opinion” page of yournewspaper.

Tell a Brief Story

Give one or two paragraphs to a single typical case, and thenmake your general point. The brief story can catch the reader’sinterest and make clear the personal implications of the topicyou will present.

Use the News Lead

Write one sentence incorporating who, what, when, where, how,and sometimes why.

During the fourteenth century, one-third of Europe’spopulation died of the bubonic plague in less than threeyears.

Move from the General to the Specific

Begin with the wider context of the topic and then zero in onthe case at hand.

When we think of “strength,” we usually picture physicalstrength—for instance, a weight lifter. But there are subtlerforms of strength. Perhaps the rarest is moral strength: theability to do what is right, even when it is inconvenient,unpopular, or dangerous. My grandfather in Italy wasactually a strongman in the circus, but I remember him forhis moral strength rather than for his powerful arms.

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PARAGRAPHS—LONG AND SHORT

The paragraphs of your essay lead the reader step by stepthrough your ideas. Each paragraph should make one point,and every sentence in it should relate to that one point. Usuallythe paragraph begins by stating the point and then goes on toexplain it and make it specific.

Paragraphs should be as long as they need to be to make onepoint. On occasion, one or two strong sentences can be enough.At other times you need nine or ten sentences to explain yourpoint. However, you want to avoid writing an essay thatconsists of either one long paragraph or a series of very shortones. Paragraphs give readers a visual landing, a place topause; so use your eye and vary the lengths of your paragraphs.

■ INDENT THE FIRST LINE

OF THE PARAGRAPH

In college papers, indent the first line of each paragraph half aninch. In business letters or reports, where you single-spacebetween lines, omit the indentation and double-space betweenthe paragraphs to divide them.

■ TOPIC SENTENCE AND SUPPORT: THE

CLASSIC PARAGRAPH PATTERN

In many college essays and reports, each middle paragraphshould demonstrate one point. The most common format forthese paragraphs is to state the point and then give the evidencethat makes it clear.

Here is the pattern:

Topic Sentence This sentence states the point of the wholeparagraph. Usually it comes first, or after a brief transition fromthe previous paragraph. However, a paragraph also can build upto a concluding topic sentence if evidence is presented first.

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Support You can back up your topic sentence by usingwhatever will make it clear to the reader: explanations ofterminology, facts, examples, or reasoning that proves yourpoint. With all of these make clear how your evidence relates toyour topic sentence.

A Wrap-up Sentence A final sentence pulls together thewhole paragraph. (This sentence should not, however,introduce the topic of the next paragraph. Changing topics atthe end of a paragraph seems disorganized. Instead, make thetransition at the beginning of the new paragraph. See page 78on transitions between paragraphs.)

■ BREAK UP LONG PARAGRAPHS

A paragraph that is more than ten sentences usually should bedivided. Find a natural point for division, such as

• A new subject or idea

• A turning point in a story

• The start of an example

• A change of location or time

■ EXPAND SHORT PARAGRAPHS

Too many short paragraphs can make your thought seemfragmented. If you have a string of paragraphs that consist ofone or two sentences, you may need to combine, develop, or omitsome of your paragraphs.

Combine

• Join two paragraphs on the same point.

• Include examples in the same paragraph as the point theyillustrate.

• Regroup your major ideas and make a new paragraph plan.

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Develop

• Give examples or reasons to support your point.

• Cite facts, statistics, or evidence to support your point.

• Relate an incident or event that supports your point.

• Explain any important general terms.

• Quote authorities to back up what you say.

Omit

If you have a short paragraph that cannot be expanded orcombined with another, chances are that paragraph should bedropped. Sometimes you have to decide whether you reallywant to explain a particular point or whether it’s not importantto your paper.

■ CHECK FOR CONTINUITY

Within a paragraph, make sure that your sentences follow alogical sequence. Each one should build on the previous oneand lead to the next.

Link your paragraphs together with transitions—taking wordsor ideas from one paragraph and using them at the beginning ofthe next one.

■ A TIP

If you keep having trouble with your paragraphs, you can relyon this basic paragraph pattern:

• A main point stated in one sentence

• An explanation of any general words in your main point

• Examples or details that support your point with the reasoneach example supports your point

• A sentence to sum up

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TRANSITIONS

Transitions are bridges in your writing that take the reader fromone thought to the next. These bridges link your ideas and helpyou to avoid choppy writing. You need transitions betweenparagraphs that show the movement from one idea to the next,and you also need transitions to connect sentences within aparagraph.

First Check the Order of Your Ideas

If you are having trouble with transitions, it may be that yourpoints are out of order. Make a list of your points and juggle theorder so that one point leads logically to the next. Then addtransitions that underscore the movement from one point to theother.

Use Transition Words

Keep your transitions brief and inconspicuous. Here are somechoices of transition words you can use to illustrate certainpoints or relationships:

Adding a point: furthermore, besides, finally, in addition to

Emphasis: above all, indeed, in fact, in other words,most important

Time: then, afterward, eventually, next, immediately,meanwhile, previously, already, often, sincethen, now, later, usually

Space: next to, across, from, above, below, nearby,inside, beyond, between, surrounding

Cause and effect: consequently, as a result, therefore, thus

Examples: for example, for instance

Progression: first, second, third, furthermore

Contrast: but, however, in contrast, instead,nevertheless, on the other hand, though, still,unfortunately

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Similarity: like, also, likewise, similarly, as, then too

Concession: although, yet, of course, after all, granted,while it is true

Conclusions: therefore, to sum up, in brief, in general, inshort, for these reasons, in retrospect, finally,in conclusion

Use Repetition of Key Words

• Repeat the word itself or variations of it.

I can never forget the year of the flood. That was the year Igrew up.

Everyone agreed that Adlai Stevenson was intelligent. Hisintelligence, however, did not always endear him to thevoters.

• Use pronouns.

People who have hypoglycemia usually need to be on aspecial diet. They should, at the very least, avoid eatingsugar.

• Use synonyms—different words with the same meaning.

When you repot plants, be certain to use a high grade ofpotting soil. Plants need good rich dirt in order to thrive.

Even though the woman was handcuffed, she kept runningaround, waving her manacled hands in the air.

Use Transitional Sentences to Link Paragraphs

Usually the transition between paragraphs comes in the firstsentence of the new paragraph.

Even though Hortense followed all of these usefulsuggestions, she still ran into an unforeseen problem.

Because of these results, the researchers decided to try anew experiment.

Notice that, in these examples, the first half of the sentencerefers to a previous paragraph; the second half points to theparagraph that is beginning.

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INCORPORATING QUOTATIONS

A good quotation demonstrates the point you are making.

Keep the Quotations Secondary to Your Own Ideas and Words

Each quotation should illustrate a definite point you want tomake. Before and after the quotation, stress your point.Maintain your own writing style throughout the paper.

Don’t Use Many Quotations

Too many quotations chop up your paper and lead the readeraway from your points. Most of the time, tell in your own stylewhat you found out. Instead of quoting, you can summarize(give the main points of what you read) or paraphrase (explaina single point in detail in your own words).

Keep Your Quotations Brief

Short quotations are the easiest and most graceful to use. Avoidusing many quotations of over three or four lines. If you want touse a long quotation, omit sections that do not apply and use anellipsis (. . .) to indicate the part you’ve left out. A long quotationshould be immediately followed by a discussion in the sameparagraph of the points you are making about the quotation.

Introduce Your Quotations

Direct quotations should usually be preceded by identifyingtags. Always make clear who is speaking and the source of theinformation.

John Holt, in his essay “How Teachers Make Children HateReading,” says “Many children associate books andreading with mistakes.”

Incorporating the author’s name and any other pertinentinformation into your text will vary your quotations:

Educator John Holt offers advice for how to read: “Findsomething, dive into it, take the good parts, skip the badparts, get what you can out of it, go on to something else.”

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In any case, don’t begin a sentence or a paragraph with a directquotation without an introduction.

Incorporate Each Quotation into a Clear Sentence

Be certain that your quotations make sense, both in sentencestructure and in content. If you use fragments of quotations, becertain that they are woven into complete sentences.

John Holt believes that reading should be “an exciting,joyous adventure.”

Note that the three examples in this chapter illustrate threeways to lead into and punctuate a quotation.

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Here is the source for the quotations in this chapter.

Holt, John. “How Teachers Make Children Hate

Reading.” Redbook. Nov. 1967: 50+. Rpt. in

Responding Voices. Ed. Jon Ford and Elaine

Hughes. New York: McGraw-Hill: 1997, 434–47.

CONCLUSIONS

Don’t end your paper with preaching or clichés. Consider, outof all that you have written, what is most important. Sometimesyou want a quick summation, but other times you will have alonger conclusion that probes your topic more deeply.

To get a memorable last sentence, try writing five sentences. Theycan express the same basic idea, but they should be worded asdifferently as possible—one long, one short, one plain, oneelegant. If you write five, you’ll find the one you want.

Here are several approaches to writing a conclusion:

Return to Your Introduction

Look back at the issues you raised in your introduction. Usingsome of the same language, say what your essay has added toyour initial thoughts. The point is not to repeat yourintroduction but to build on it.

Summarize

Stress your main points, but avoid repeating earlier phrasesword for word. Summaries can be boring, so make an effort togive yours some kick.

Suggest a Solution to a Problem

Come up with a solution you think might make a difference,and tell how your findings could affect the future.

Put Your Ideas in a Wider Perspective

What is the importance of what you have said? What is thelarger meaning? Move from the specifics of your topic to thedeeper concerns it suggests.

Raise Further Questions or Implications

Which issues now remain? Acknowledge the limitations ofwhat you have covered. Reaffirm what you have established.Examine what it implies.

Above all, don’t just limp out of your paper. Leave your readerwith a strong and memorable statement.

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HOW TO MAKE A PAPER LONGER

(AND WHEN TO MAKE IT SHORTER)

Adding words and phrases to your paper makes it at most aninch longer. Adding new points or new examples will make itgrow half a page at a time. On the other hand, there are timeswhen cutting a little bit will make your whole paper stronger.

How to Make a Paper Longer

• Add an example or explain your reasons to clarify yourpoint—or even add a new point.

• Mention other views of the subject that differ from yours:either incorporate them (showing the evidence for them) ordisprove them (telling why others might accept them andwhy you reject them).

• Add details (facts, events that happened, things you can seeor hear). Details are the life of a paper. Instead of writing,“We got something to drink,” write “We took water fromthe stream with Stacey’s tin cup. The water was so cold ithurt our stomachs.”

• Expand your conclusion: Discuss implications andquestions that your paper brings to mind.

but

• Don’t add empty phrases, because they make your writingboring. Don’t fake length by using fat margins, bighandwriting, or a large typeface.

When to Make a Paper Shorter

• Condense minor points. Sometimes you think a point isnecessary, but when you read your paper to a friend, younotice that you both get bored in that section. Or sometimesyou get tangled up trying to make a point clear when youcan cover it briefly or cut it entirely.

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• Watch your pace when you tell a series of events. Headtoward the main point or event directly. Don’t get lost inboring preliminary details.

• Avoid getting sidetracked. The digression may interest you,but it may not add to the real point of the essay.

• Check to see whether you have repeated any point severaltimes. If so, decide on the most effective place to make thatpoint and make it fully in one place.

HOW TO WORK ON A SECOND DRAFT

Computers make revision easier, but they can make it seem tooeasy. It’s not enough simply to patch up a first draft by insertinga phrase or sentence in a few spots or by merely spellchecking.

Revision is not just fixing errors. It means taking a fresh look atyour paper. You may need to move some parts of it, add thedetails of a point you have barely mentioned, or completelyrewrite a section.

This chapter offers you a number of ways to improve yourpaper.

Focus on the Real Goal of Your Paper

• A big danger is straying from your subject. It’s tempting toinclude good ideas or long examples that are related to yoursubject but do not support your main point.

• Your real point may not be the point with which you started.Decide what you are really saying. You may need to write anew introduction that stresses your real goal.

• You might find it helpful to write a note to yourself thatbegins, “The main point of my paper is . . .” Keep it infront of you as you revise.

Play with the Order of Your Points

Reconsider the organization of your ideas.

• Make a list of your points in the order you wrote them.

• Now play with the order so that each one logically leads tothe next.

• Get rid of points that aren’t related.

• Cover some points briefly as parts of other points.

• Help your reader to navigate through your paper bymaking a logical transition to each new idea.

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Look for Strong Parts and Weak Parts

• Add to what’s strong. When revising, writers tend to focuson the weak spots. Instead, start by looking for the goodparts in your paper. Underline or highlight them, and writemore about them. Add examples. Explain more fully. Youmay find that you have written a new, much better paper.

• Fix up what’s weak. Look at the parts that are giving youtrouble. Do you really need them? Are they in the rightplace? If you got tangled up trying to say something thatyou consider important, stop and ask yourself, “What is itI’m trying to say, after all?” Then say it to yourself in plainEnglish and write it down that way.

Give the Reader the Picture

Make sure the reader really sees what you mean.

• If you are telling a story, put in the strong details thatconvey what the experience was like.

• If you are arguing for a position, fully explain your reasonsand lay out the evidence.

• If you are expressing an opinion, tell specifically what gaveyou that idea.

Get Help at the Writing Center or Learning Center

Your college writing center or learning center is staffed byprofessionals trained to assist you with your writing. Bringyour paper, and a tutor will give you constructive advice. Youalso may be able to get help online.

Read Aloud to a Friend

• When you read your paper to a friend, notice what you addas you read—what information or explanations you feelcompelled to put in. Jot down these additions and put theminto the paper.

• Ask your friend to tell you what came through. All youwant is what he or she heard—not whether it’s good, nothow to change it. Then let your friend ask you questions.However, don’t let your friend take over and tell you whatto write.

Final Touches

• Look again at the proportions of your paper. Are some ofthe paragraphs too short and choppy? Is there one that isoverly long?

• Look at your introduction and conclusion. Play with thefirst and last sentences of your paper in order to begin andend with the strongest statements that you can. Write theidea three or four different ways—with very differentwording—then choose the best.

• Write a title that catches the reader’s attention andannounces your specific subject.

• Be sure to use the spellchecker to catch trouble spots. Thenproofread your paper closely several times, watchingespecially for errors in any of the new material you’vewritten.

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SHORTCUTS FOR “WORD”

Here are some tips to save time when you are using MicrosoftWord, the most commonly used word processing program.Some of these tips also work in other programs.

■ SETTING UP THE DOCUMENT

To insert the current date

To add page numbers

To add a header to eachpage

To align your header onthe right

To avoid numbering yourfirst page

To center your title

To set the margins for thewhole document or forjust a selection

To single-space

To double-space

To customize your toolbar

To set paragraphindentations

To set a hanging indent fora works cited or referencepage

Insert Menu > Date and Time

Insert Menu > Page Numbers

View Menu > Header andFooter; type your header intothe box

Ctrl + R

File Menu > Page Setup >Layout; click “different headerfor first page”

Ctrl + E

File Menu > Page Setup >Margins

Ctrl + 1

Ctrl + 2

Right-click on a blank sectionof the toolbar; click“customize”

Format Menu> Paragraph >Indents and Spacing >Indentations > Left > + 0.5″Special > first line

Format Menu> Paragraph >Indents and Spacing > Special> Hanging By > 0.5″

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Warning: Be careful to use a unique abbreviation (such as onewith an x); asking AutoCorrect to replace “war” with WorldWar II throughout your paper would create a disaster. You mayalso find it helpful to keep a list of your abbreviations.

Using the Ruler (at the top of the page)

The upper marker on the left of the ruler sets the left margin forthe first line of each paragraph; the lower marker sets the leftmargin for the second and any following lines.

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To set paragraphindentations

To form a hanging indentfor a works cited orreference page

Click and slide the uppermarker to the half-inch point,leaving the lower marker atthe left margin

Click and slide the lowermarker to the half-inch point,leaving the upper marker atthe left margin

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1

To automatically correcterrors you usually make

To insert a specific word orphrase whenever you typeits abbreviation

Tools Menu > AutoCorrect;check “Replace text as youtype”; then modify the list thatfollows

Tools Menu > AutoCorrect;check “Replace text as youtype”; then type in theabbreviation and the word toreplace it—for example“Replace ppx withPeloponnesian”

A mouseclick at any point on the ruler can set a tab (markedwith a little L).

Using AutoCorrect (set this up before you type)

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■ TYPING AND EDITING

To hide the red wavy lines(Spelling) or the greenwavy lines (Grammar)

To add to your customdictionary

To locate all instances of anerror and replace it withthe word or words youspecify

To check for repetition ofpoints or overuse ofcertain words

To prevent unwanted textcolor (for example, withWeb addresses)

To mark changes as yourevise

Tools Menu > Options >Spelling and Grammar >Hide . . . errors

Tools Menu > AutoCorrect >Exceptions

Edit Menu > Find (or Ctrl + F);type the word or phrase youwant to change; then click onReplace and type the word orphrase you prefer

Edit Menu > Find (or Ctrl + F);type the word or phrase youwant to see

Format Menu > Font > Fontcolor; select black instead ofautomatic color

Ctrl + Shift + E

Working with Graphics

To wrap text aroundinserted graphics

To adjust the size of thetext box

To adjust the position ofthe highlighted image

Right-click on the graphic;Format picture > Layout

Click on the borderlines anddrag

Drag it, or press Ctrl + one ofthe arrow keys

■ USING KEYBOARD SHORTCUTS

You probably already use a few keyboard shortcuts—such asCtrl + S to save or Ctrl + P to print. Check “keys” under theHelp menu to find other two- or three-key combinations, suchas those for foreign accents.

Maneuvers for the Entire Document

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Ctrl + ZTo undo achange

To use thespellchecker

F7

Alt + F4To close aprogram

To move withinpreview pagewhile zoomedin

Arrowkeys

Ctrl + YTo repeat thelast action

To delete oneword to the left

Ctrl +back-space

Shift + F5To go to the lastchange

To delete oneword to theright

Ctrl +Delete

Ctrl + Alt+ Delete

To get out of afrozen program

To search fortext orformatting

Ctrl + F

Shift + F3To changecapitalization

To add/removeunderline

Ctrl + U

Highlight the Selection before Using These Shortcuts

(Double-click on the mouse to highlight a word; triple-click tohighlight a paragraph.)

Ctrl +Shift + >

To increase fontsize

To add/removebold

Ctrl + B

Ctrl +Shift + <

To decrease fontsize

To add/removeitalics

Ctrl + I

Ctrl + DTo open Fontmenu (to changeformat)

Use These Shortcuts on the Web

Some of the shortcuts above will also work while surfing withyour browser. Here are some more:

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F5To refresh thescreen

To add thecurrent websiteto yourfavorites

Ctrl + D

Ctrl + HTo review thesites you havevisited (history)

To keep theoriginal websitewindow openwhen you clickon a link

Holddown theshift keyas youclick

■ SWITCHING BETWEEN MAC AND WINDOWS

Mac Windows

Command key Ctrl key

Option key Alt key

Mouse button Left button on mouse

Mouse button + Right button on mouse (forCommand key information on the selection or

to give other options)

To close the window

See upper left of screen See upper right of screen

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PROOFREADING TIPS

The key to proofreading is doing it several times. Carelesserrors undermine what you have said, so make a practice ofproofreading methodically.

Here are some tips to help you spot mistakes:

Make a Break between Writing and Proofreading

Always put a little distance between the writing of a paper andthe proofreading of it. That way you’ll see it fresh and catcherrors you might have otherwise overlooked. Set the paperaside for the night—or even for twenty minutes—while youcatch your breath. When you write in class, train yourself not towrite up until the final moment; give yourself an extra tenminutes before the end of class to proofread your paper severaltimes before handing it in.

Search for Trouble

Assume that you have made unconscious errors and really lookfor them. Slow down your reading considerably, and actuallylook at every word.

Know Your Own Typical Mistakes

Before you proofread, look over any papers you’ve alreadygotten back corrected. Recall the errors you need to watch for.As you’re writing this paper, take ten minutes to learn from thelast one.

Proofread for One Type of Error

If periods and commas are your biggest problem, or if youalways leave off apostrophes, or if you always write your foryou’re, go through the paper checking for just that one problem.Then go back and proofread to check for other mistakes.

Proofread Out of Order

Try starting with the last sentence of the paper and readingbackwards to the first sentence; or proofread the second half ofthe paper first (since that’s where most of the errors usuallyare), take a break, and then proofread the first half.

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Proofread Aloud

Always try to read your paper aloud at least once. This willslow you down, and you’ll hear the difference between whatyou meant to write and what you actually wrote.

Look Up Anything You’re Not Sure Of

Use this book and a dictionary. You’ll learn nothing byguessing, but you’ll learn something forever if you take the timeto look it up.

With a Computer, Proofread on Both Screen and Page

Scroll through and make corrections on the screen. Double-check places where you have inserted or deleted material. Usethe spellchecker, but remember that it will not catch commonlyconfused words like to and too or your and you’re.

Proofread Your Final Copy Several Times

It does no good to proofread a draft of your paper and thenforget to proofread the final copy. This problem crops up often,especially in typewritten papers. Remember: A typo or a printererror is just as much an error as any other error.

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FORMAT OF COLLEGE PAPERS

The following guidelines are appropriate for most college papers.Ask your teacher for any specific requirements.

■ TYPING YOUR PAPER

Typeface

• Use a 12-point typeface on the computer.

• Do not use all capital letters, all italics, all boldface, orstrange fonts.

Spacing

• Set your computer to double-space between lines; youshould get approximately twenty-seven lines per page.(Double-space even for long quotations.)

• Use a one-inch margin on all four sides.

• Indicate the beginning of each paragraph by indenting thefirst line five spaces.

• Do not justify (line up the margin) on the right unless askedto do so. Justifying on the right distorts the spacing betweenletters and words, making your paper harder to read.

• At the bottom of the page, use a full last line, unless you’reending a paragraph. It’s all right to end a page in mid-sentence.

Spacing after Punctuation

• Leave one space after most punctuation marks.

Periods Commas ColonsSemicolons Question marks Exclamation marks

The older convention of two spaces after a sentence is stillacceptable.

• Make a dash by using two hyphens—with no space beforeor after.

• Make an ellipsis (. . .) by using three periods with a spacebefore and after each period.

• Never begin a line with a period or a comma.

• Never put a space before a punctuation mark (except for anellipsis or an opening parenthesis).

Dividing Words When Writing by Hand

• Avoid, as much as possible, dividing a word from one lineto the next. If you can, fit it on one line or the other.

• If you must divide a very long word, divide only betweensyllables. To find the syllables, look up the word in adictionary. It will be printed with dots between thesyllables: ex • per • i • men • ta • tion.

• Never divide a one-syllable word, like brought. Never dividea word after only one letter.

Header with Page Number

Create a header with your last name and the page number oneach page after the first.

■ ASSEMBLING YOUR PAPER

Cover Sheet or First Page

Include

• The title, without quotation marks or underlining

• Your name

• The teacher’s name

• The course title and number

• The date

If you use a cover sheet, center the title in the middle of thepage, and put the other information in the lower right-handcorner. If you don’t use a cover sheet, put your name and soforth in the upper-left corner; then skip two lines and center thetitle.

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Binding

• Staple once or clip in the upper-left corner.

• Do not put your paper in a binder or folder unless you havebeen asked to.

■ SUBMITTING PAPERS ELECTRONICALLY

When you submit a paper electronically, simply attach yourdocument to an email unless you are instructed otherwise.

When you post a paper on a website,

• Single space and use block format for paragraphs (no initialindent).

• Skip a line between paragraphs, and number yourparagraphs (put the numbers in brackets).

• Either use one underline before and after a title younormally would underline, or italicize when using HTML.

• Save as a text or HTML file.

■ A WORD ABOUT PROOFREADING

• A typo counts as an error; it’s no excuse to say, “Oh, that’sjust a typo.”

• Proofread your paper both on the monitor and on the hardcopy. Don’t rely solely on a spellchecker; it will miss errorslike to for too.

• If necessary, make last-minute corrections with a pen: Drawa line through the word you wish to change and write thecorrection above the line.

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SPECIAL CASE: WRITING

AN ESSAY IN CLASS

A wave of panic—that’s what most people feel when they arehanded an assignment to be written in class. Some students,feeling the pressure, plunge in and write the first thoughts thatcome to mind. But your first thoughts aren’t necessarily yourbest thoughts. There’s a smarter way to write in a limited time.

Take Your Time at the Beginning

• Reread the instructions carefully. Be sure you’re writingwhat you’ve been asked for.

• Jot down brief notes for a few minutes. Don’t write wholesentences yet—just a word or phrase for each idea, example,or fact.

• Take a few more minutes to expand your notes. Stay calm.Don’t start writing too soon.

• Decide on the parts of your essay.

For an Essay about Information, Stress Your Organization

• Write an introduction that indicates the parts of your essay.One simple technique is to give a full sentence in yourintroduction for each of the main points you plan to make:

Sigmund Freud is famous for three important ideas. Hepopularized the idea that we repress or bottle up ourfeelings. He explored the idea of the unconscious. Mostimportant, he stressed the idea that our family relationshipswhen we are children determine our adult relationships.

Note how the number “three” in the first sentence helps thereader to see the plan of the whole essay.

• Write a paragraph for each point using the same order asyou did in your introduction. In each middle paragraph,restate the point, explain what you mean by any generalwords, and give facts or examples to prove your point.

• Write a brief conclusion, stressing what’s most important.

For Short Essays on an Exam, Write One Paragraph

Write a one-sentence introduction that uses words from thequestion and asserts your answer. Then, in the same paragraph,present three facts to support your answer, explaining one factat a time. Finally, sum up your position in the last sentence ofthe paragraph.

For a Personal Essay, Stress What You Have Discovered

While the three-point essay can get you by, it can easily becomestilted and boring. In a personal essay, you have many moreoptions.

• If you’re asked to write about a significant event in your life,begin your essay by describing it briefly. Use vivid details tobring it to life. Then use most of your essay to tell what youlearned from this event or how it has changed you.Remember to divide your essay into paragraphs.

• If you’re asked to give your opinion about a topic, yousometimes can use personal examples to support yourposition. In your introduction make clear where you stand.Then give each important point its own paragraph withexamples. Use your own experiences, your ownobservations, and incidents you’ve read about.

• If you can’t come up with a strong introduction at first, goahead and write your essay. In the process, you will clarifyyour central idea; then you can go back to introduce it.

• In your conclusion, don’t preach and don’t fall back onoverused generalizations. Say what matters to you or whatyou have discovered.

STRATEGIES TO SAVE TIME

Don’t Start Over

• Stick to your plan. If you get a new idea, use an asterisk (*)or an arrow to show where it goes.

• Leave room after each paragraph for ideas you might wantto add later. If you are writing in an exam booklet, write ononly the front side of the page so that you will have roomfor insertions.

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• If you add or cut a main point, go back and revise yourintroduction to match the change.

Don’t Pad Your Writing

Use a direct, no-nonsense style. Don’t try for big words—theyjust lead to errors when you are under time pressure. Simplystate your points and the facts to back them up, one step at atime.

Don’t Make a Neat Copy

Copying over wastes precious time, and the copy tends to befull of slips and errors. Instead, put a line through an error andcorrect it above the line; use a caret (^) for a short insertion, anasterisk (*) or arrow for a long insertion.

Don’t Rush at the End

• Stop writing ten minutes before the end of the allotted time.

• Read your essay for content. Don’t add to it unless you finda major omission. Late additions usually create errors anddisorganization.

• Proofread, with special attention to the second half of theessay (where rushing leads to errors) and to the very firstsentence. Look closely for the errors you usually make.Look for words like to and too, then and than. Check yourperiods to be sure you have no run-on sentences orfragments. Look carefully to make sure that you haven’t leftout any words or letters.

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SPECIAL CASE: WRITING ABOUT LITERATURE

When you are asked to write about literature, make sure of yourteacher’s expectations. Some teachers want a summary of yourreading, in which you tell the main points of what you’ve read,followed by your evaluation. However, most literature teacherswant you to stress an important idea about the reading and todemonstrate the details that gave you your idea. Usually, youwill rely on details from the text itself, but you may also beasked to write a research paper about literature, incorporatinginformation and ideas from scholars in the field.

■ GENERAL GUIDELINES

FOR LITERATURE PAPERS

You can adapt the methods described here for writing aboutother arts such as film, music, painting, dance, and architecture.

Gather Your First Impressions of the Topic

Your first reading should be a time to enjoy the text, to respondwithout the pressure to come up with answers. A good idea isto keep a reading journal in which you jot down your reactionsto the text as they come to you.

After you finish reading the work of literature, write down yourfirst impressions, checking the assigned topic. Write quickly,without pausing, to get your ideas on paper. This freewritingwill help you to discover the main idea you want to stress.

Reread the Text

Search for evidence to support your main idea and also forevidence that might lead you to modify it. The evidence couldinclude specific quotations, details, events, or subtleties of style.Make notes as you reread, and mark passages you may wish toquote.

Organize Your Essay

Do not merely follow the order of what you read. Instead,decide on your main idea, the points you want to stress, and thebest sequence to make them clear.

Omit Plot Summary and the Author’s Life

Unless you’ve been asked to, do not include a detailed plotsummary repeating all the events of the story. Remember, theteacher already knows what the book says but does not knowyour ideas about the assignment. Your job is to show the readeryour point about the story rather than to retell the story.However, you will refer to details from the plot when you giveexamples to support your ideas.

Do not include a summary of the author’s life in your essayunless you have been asked to do so.

Use Evidence to Back Up Your Points

For each main point, explain which details from the readinggave you that idea. In some cases, briefly quote the author. Afterreferring to a detail or quoting a passage, always explain whythat detail or passage supports your point.

Incorporate Quotations Gracefully

Keep quotations few and, in most cases, brief. Include onlyquotations that help to show the point you are making. First,make your point. Then lead into the quotation by brieflyreferring to its context. Make clear whether you are quoting theauthor or a character. When you quote a character, refer to thecharacter by name rather than to the author.

After the quotation, particularly if it is a sentence or more,comment on its significance—tie it to the point of yourparagraph.

For specific skills of quotation, including how to quote poetry,see “Quotation Marks,” pages 45–48. For strategies in usingquotations, see “Incorporating Quotations” pages 79–80.

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■ RESEARCH PAPERS ABOUT LITERATURE

One of the major differences between a literary research paperand other research papers is that in a literary paper your mainfocus is on the text itself. The research takes second place toyour own close reading of the piece you are writing about. Inwriting a research paper about literature, follow the guidelinesfor all literature papers, with these additional considerations.

Be Clear about the Assignment

Make sure you understand what you are being asked to do: Areyou being asked to compare your ideas to those of critics? Areyou being asked to find out about the historical contextsurrounding a piece of work? The specific assignment willdictate the kind of sources you should choose.

Freewrite before Doing Research

Before reading any critics, freewrite about the topic, if yourteacher has given you one; otherwise write about your thoughtsand feelings in response to the reading. Write out several ideasthat you might emphasize in an essay.

Choose Several Critics to Read

Not all critical studies are equal. To find the best critics to read,a good place to start is with the introduction and any list ofrecommended readings in the edition of the work you arestudying. You can also look at recommended sources inanthologies (such as The Norton Anthology of English Literature).The most complete listings of books and articles about literatureare in the MLA (Modern Language Association) Bibliography.Also, your professor may guide you to the best critical studies.

Read the critics carefully and critically. Look for ideas thatcorrespond to your own experience of the work. Be open toreconsidering and refining your first impressions, even changingthem completely at times. But remember that your experience asa reader has value and must be the heart of your essay.

Incorporate Ideas of Critics into Your Essay

For most assignments, the critics you’ve read should notdominate your essay. Organize your paper around your ideas,

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presenting one idea at a time, rather than presenting one criticat a time. Don’t get bogged down in the ideas of critics.Remember that your ideas are still the center of your paper.

In most cases paraphrase or summarize the ideas of critics,quoting them directly only when their phrasing is significant ormemorable—when you will comment on the critic’s wording.Always relate a critic’s ideas to the main thrust or thesis of youressay.

Remember that your primary subject is the literature itself. Itoffers the best evidence for your ideas. The majority of yourexamples and quotations will come from the literary text.

■ CONVENTIONS OF LITERARY ESSAYS

Titles

• Underline or italicize titles of books, periodicals, plays, films,and television programs. Put “quotation marks” aroundtitles of stories, poems, essays, and one-act plays.

• Capitalize the first word, major words, and words of fiveletters or more.

• The title of your paper should express your main idea, notjust give the title of the text.

The Uses of Rhyme in Robert Browning’s “My LastDuchess”

For detailed instructions about titles, see “Titles: Underlines,Italics, or Quotation Marks,” page 49.

Identifying the Author and Title

• Use the author’s full name the first time you mention it.Thereafter, use the last name, never the first name by itself.

• Be sure to identify the title and author early in your essay,even if you’ve already done so in your title.

In “A Fly Buzzed When I Died,” Emily Dickinson presents adisturbing vision of the moment of death.

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In King Lear, Shakespeare examines a king’s assumptionsabout language.

“A Rose for Family,” by William Faulkner, is a study ofchanging social classes.

Laura Esquivel’s Like Water for Chocolate explores theconsequences of passion.

You can use this type of sentence to begin your essay, or youcan introduce the general topic (death, language, social classes,passion) and then identify the specific text you will examine.

Note carefully the punctuation in these examples. Rememberthat a comma or period goes inside quotation marks.

Using Correct Literary Terms

A story is a series of events leading to a climax. You may bewriting about a story, but you are writing an essay. A novel is abook-length story.

Articles and essays are short works of nonfiction. In some casesthese terms may be used interchangeably; in general, however,articles are written for publication and usually presentinformation, while essays may or may not be written forpublication and usually present reflections and ideas basedupon observation.

A poem is arranged with lines of varying length; some poems arealso divided into stanzas (groups of lines).

A play is a story written to be presented in a theatre. It consistsmostly of the dialogue of the characters but also contains briefstage directions to describe the set, sound, costumes, andlighting and to indicate actions of the characters.

Verb Tenses

In writing your paper, use the present tense, the most gracefultense for referring to a poem or story.

Early in the novel, Elizabeth misjudges Darcy.

Yeats portrays a “glimmering girl” who can never becaptured.

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Also use present tense in referring to the ideas of most critics.(However, use past tense for critics from before the twentiethcentury.)

■ BIBLIOGRAPHICAL INFORMATION

Page References

In your paper, indicate the location of each quotation from yourprimary source by putting the page numbers in parenthesesfollowing the quotation.

The first chapter of Hawthorne’s The Scarlet Letter punson the mix of church and state in the “Steeple-crownedhats” of the Puritans (35).

If the quotation is indented, put the period before theparenthesis; otherwise, put the period last.

• For a poem (such as Coleridge’s “The Rime of the AncientMariner”), give the line numbers.

Water, water, every where,And all the boards did shrink; Water, water, every where,Nor any drop to drink. (119–122)

• For the Bible, give the abbreviated title of the specific book,with chapter and verse.

To every thing there is a season, and a time to everypurpose under the heaven. (Eccles. 3.1)

• For a play (such as Shakespeare’s Antony and Cleopatra), giveact, scene, and lines.

Age cannot wither her, nor custom staleHer infinite variety. (2.2.234–235)

• When quoting or referring to a critic, mention the critic’sname.

Eudora Welty says that, in To the Lighthouse, VirginiaWoolf “has shown us the shape of the human spirit” (xii).

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Works Cited

Your Works Cited should include an entry for every source youcited within the paper, including the edition of the literary textthat you have used.

Hughes, Langston. “Mother to Son.” Selected

Poems of Langston Hughes. New York: Knopf,

1970. 187.

If the book was originally published in an edition different fromyours, put the original date of publication after the title:

Woolf, Virginia. To the Lighthouse. 1927. San

Diego: Harcourt, 1981.

If you used a poem or short story in an anthology or anintroduction or a preface from a book, you need to include acitation for the author and specific short work you referred to,as well as all the information for the book, including the pagescovered.

Meltzer, Richard. “The Aesthetics of Rock.”

Penguin Book of Rock & Roll Writing. Ed.

Clinton Heylin. New York: Viking, 1992.

81–87.

Welty, Eudora. Foreword. To the Lighthouse. By

Virginia Woolf. San Diego: Harcourt, 1981.

vii–xii.

For further details, see the chapter “Documentation: The MLAStyle,” pages 131–145.

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HOW TO START A RESEARCH PROJECT

Here it comes again, that terrifying request from a teacher for a“research” or “term” paper. You don’t have to be scared by thenames of these papers. A research or term paper is simply afairly long paper in which you set forth a point of view andsupport it with outside sources of information.

The trouble with many student papers is that they presentinformation one source at a time, pretty much copying from thesources and changing a few words. Instead, a good researchpaper presents your view of the topic, guiding the reader oneidea at a time into what you have come to understand.

■ WRITE FIRST, RESEARCH SECOND

To conduct efficient research, you have to know what you’relooking for. If you connect right away to the Web or headstraight to the library, you’re likely to wander around in a mazeof information. One hour spent defining your goals can saveyou many hours in the long run.

Freewrite about the Topic

Take fifteen minutes to discover your preliminary focus. Writerapidly, as thoughts come to you.

• Why are you interested in this subject?

• What do you already know about it?

• What questions do you want answered?

List Your Research Questions

What do you hope to find out? List all the questions that youwant to answer, and mark the ones that have the highestpriority.

Narrow Your Topic

Before searching for reading materials, limit what you’llattempt to cover; otherwise, you will read yourself into a hole

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and never get your paper written. One method is to write acontrolling sentence (a thesis statement) that will explain andlimit your paper. You may sometimes have to use twosentences, but try for one.

Pizza is the most wholesome fast food on the Americanmarket today.

In this example, the general topic of “pizza” has been narrowedto a focus on the nutritional value of pizza.

■ START WITH A REFERENCE BOOK

If a topic is very new to you, start with an introduction to thesubject in a textbook or encyclopedia. For instance, if you havechosen to write about the nutritional value of pizza, you’d bewise to read up on nutritional guidelines in general.

■ COLLECT SEARCH TERMS

Search terms are words and phrases that you can use to findmaterials on your topic. For example, information on pizza canbe found with the search terms

fast food Italian cookery pizzamozzarella Domino’s Pizza Hut

You will need a list of search terms whether you are using theInternet, a library catalog, a computerized database, or aprinted index. Make a list of the key words in your subject:

• different ways it can be called

• categories it fits into

• subtopics

Add to your list by reviewing class notes, looking in a textbook,browsing on the Web, or reading an encyclopedia article.Names of authors and other experts in the field can be goodsearch terms.

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■ USE A VARIETY OF SOURCES

Don’t limit your research by sticking only to the sources you’remost comfortable with. You might find it easy to search theInternet and difficult to use the library. Or you might know howto find a book in the library but not how to find articles inperiodicals. Use your ingenuity to come up with a variety ofsources and to track down leads.

Network Tell your family and friends that you’re looking forinformation; ask them to save articles for you and to listen forreports on the radio or television.

Ask an Expert A teacher, businessperson, physician, or otherexpert on the subject can point you to the most valuablesources. You might even make an appointment to tape aninterview and get the real lowdown on the topic from an expert.

Look for Unusual Sources Outside of the Library

• Use the telephone book to find organizations devoted toyour topic.

• Visit a business, a museum, or another institution.

• Rent a documentary videotape.

• Log on to the website of a relevant government department.

■ MANAGE YOUR TIME

Most students spend weeks gathering information and onlydays (or hours!) writing the report. However, writing the paperitself will almost always take much longer than you expect, soset a deadline for when you’ll stop looking for moreinformation.

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THREE ESSENTIAL RESEARCH SKILLS

Whether you’re conducting research in the library or at homeon your computer, you’ll need these skills to find good sourcesof information and to extract what you need from them:

• Using search terms

• Choosing the best sources

• Taking usable notes

■ USING SEARCH TERMS

Single Search Terms

For many listings, you can look under only one term at a time;therefore, you will need to try several of your search terms. Inyour search, remember to

• Use synonyms for different search terms.

• Try using different subtopics.

Combining Search Terms

In many electronic formats, you can and should usecombinations of different search terms. Let’s say you’reinterested in the nutritional value of pizza. You can combine theterm pizza with terms like nutrition, health, calories, and fat.

Every search program uses slightly different rules of operation,but most use two searching conventions:

• Quotation marks to indicate that a phrase is to be treated asone search term“fast food”

• Boolean operators:

and specifies that both terms should appear

pizza and nutrition

or specifies that either term should appear

pepperoni or sausage

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not specifies that a term should not appear

domino’s not game

When a search program says that “Boolean and is implied,” youdon’t need to type and; just type in all the terms you want witha space between them.

pizza nutrition calorie fat

Some search programs use the plus (+) sign to mean that aparticular term must appear, and the minus sign (–) instead of not.

+pizza+sausage–pepperoni

Some programs allow you to specify words that are near(within ten words of) each other. Some programs also allow youto give the root of a word followed by an asterisk (*) so that youcan find the variations of the word. For example, articles having“nutritional” and “pizza” close together will most likely discussthe nutritional aspects of pizza. Asking for nutri* will call uparticles that include nutrient(s), nutrition, nutritional,nutritionist(s), or nutritious.

Many programs invite you to type in a question. However, youwill get better results if you submit the phrasing that you hopeto find in the answer.

WHEN YOU FIND TOO FEW

OR TOO MANY SOURCES

The help line for the particular program you are using isyour first resource when you’re in a jam. Here are someother steps to take:

No Match for Your Request

• You may have misspelled one or more words.

• You may have used the wrong symbols or phrasing forthat particular search engine.

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• You may have submitted too narrow a search. Trygeneralizing a bit—for example change the phrase “fatcontent of pizza” to “fat and pizza,” or add alternatives(“nonfat or lowfat”).

• Give both the abbreviation and the full name, linked byor (“NIH or National Institutes of Health”).

• You may need to try a different search engine ordatabase.

• The information may be there, but your computercannot reach it at this time. Try later.

Too Many Listings

• Take a look at the first ten results to see whether theycoincide at all with your topic. For instance, if yourinquiry on pizza yielded thousands of articles, and thefirst ten are all about specific restaurants, you’ll need torephrase the search.

• If the first ten listings are on your topic, skim a few ofthem to extract more search terms.

• Add more words to your search string.

pizza+calorie+carbohydrate+protein+fat

• Try putting a more specific word first in a search string.

• Use not or the minus sign (–) in front of terms that youdo not want.

pizza not restaurant not parlor not deliverypizza–restaurant–parlor–delivery

■ CHOOSING THE BEST SOURCES

OF INFORMATION

Search first for information electronically. Use the library’sonline catalog to find books and media materials on yoursubject. Use CD-ROM indexes to find articles in periodicals,journals, magazines, and newspapers. Ask the librarian forspecialized databases in your subject field. On the Internet, use

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several search engines, subject directories, and reference pages.See pages 120–121, below.

All books and articles are not equal. Be prepared to rejectsources that don’t fit your topic. Particularly watch out for:

• Sources that are too old

• Sources that are too specialized

• Sources that are too superficial

• Sources that aren’t relevant to your specific angle on thetopic

• Sources that repeat what you already have

Look for a mix of books and articles, making sure that most ofyour sources are up-to-date, especially for scientific andtechnical topics. (For literary and historical topics, some olderbooks are superior.)

Consider the level of information you require. A twenty-page paper needs much more detailed information and analysisthan a five-page paper. A paper on the nutritional value of fastfoods will be much more complex for a class in nutrition thanfor English 101.

Stick to your angle on the topic. As you look through thesources you’ve gathered, focus on the primary questions you’veset out to answer. Don’t let a source on a different subtopic leadyou away from your goals. One skill of a good researcher isknowing which books and articles to bypass.

Consult the “List of Valuable Sources” at the back of thisbook. You will find a variety of electronic and print sources ofinformation.

■ TAKING USABLE NOTES

Good notes are brief—you don’t want to copy or downloadlarge chunks of information. Nor can you write your paperwhile taking notes. Taking notes and writing your paper mustbe two separate steps.

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Record Bibliographical Information

Make sure you have the details about your source that you willneed for your Works Cited, References, or Bibliography.

For a Book• Author

• Title

• Place of publication

• Publisher

• Date of publication

For an Article• Author

• Title of article

• Title of publication

• Date

• Pages

For a Book or Article Originally in Print But Read on theComputer, note the information for the print version plus:

• Service (for example, InfoTrac)

• Library and its city

• Date you viewed it

For an Article on the Internet

• Author (if given)

• Title of article (or type of article if email or online posting)

• Name of website

• Date posted or last revised

• Sponsoring organization (if given)

• Date you viewed it

• Internet address

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Keep Your Notes Brief but Understandable

Next, take notes sparingly as you read. Take notes in phrases,not whole sentences. You will run yourself crazy if you try totake down every word, and your notes will be harder for you toread. If a quotation strikes you as well said or interesting, copyit word for word and put quotation marks around it in yournotes.

Downloading and Photocopying

Downloading is a real time saver, but it increases the risk ofplagiarism. Use a separate file for each item copiedelectronically. The point is to remember that every word ofdownloaded material is copied (plagiarized). This material cannot beused honestly in your own paper as is but must be carefullyquoted from, paraphrased, or summarized.

When using a photocopy, you still must be able to tell where itcame from; so immediately write the publication informationon the photocopy.

In any case, a photocopy or a copy to your disk is not asubstitute for notes. When you take notes, you are taking a steptoward putting the information you’ve found into your ownwords.

Flashes of Insight

If you get an insight of your own as you are reading, stop andwrite about it. You may suddenly think of a great opening line,or realize that your points should come in a certain order, ordisagree strongly with what you are reading. These ideas willevaporate if you don’t take a minute to write them downimmediately.

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GETTING INFORMATION

AT THE LIBRARY

The library is your best single source of information. Howeverthe danger in the library is not knowing what you want andgetting lost in the maze of research. To avoid getting lost, besure to write down in advance the primary questions you hopeto answer and search terms you can use in your research.

■ FINDING A BOOK

Your first step in finding a book is to search in the onlinecatalog.

Books, media holdings, and reference materials are cataloged byauthor, title, and subject. At least in the beginning, you will beusing the subject catalog to locate books and authors. On thecomputer, follow the system’s instructions to see a “briefrecord,” listing several books, or to see a “full record,” givingdetailed information about each book. Use a variety of generalsearch terms. For example, you probably won’t find a bookentitled The Nutritional Value of Pizza, but you will find booksincluding both of the subjects pizza and nutrition.

When you find books that look valuable, copy down the catalognumbers you need, or have the computer print a list for you.You need the complete call number to locate a book. It alsohelps to copy down the author and title. Once you find the bookon the shelf, take time to browse through that section for otherrelevant titles.

■ FINDING AN ARTICLE

Articles in magazines, newspapers, and scholarly journals haveinformation that is more up-to-date than books and thusprovide an essential resource for good research.

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Reference Section

Most teachers do not consider encyclopedia and dictionaryarticles adequate sources for college research papers.Nevertheless, encyclopedias and specialized reference books areoften the best place to start your research because they give youan overview of your subject. The reference section of the libraryalso contains dictionaries, bibliographies, and specialcollections of statistical information. You should ask thelibrarian where to browse for your particular subject.

Periodical Indexes and Databases

To find articles in newspapers, magazines, and journals, youwill need to consult databases (on computers) and indexes (inbound volumes). FirstSearch, InfoTrac, Lexis-Nexis, MagazineIndex Plus, and the Reader’s Guide list all subjects covered inpopular magazines. The New York Times Index and The NationalNewspaper Index list subjects covered in newspapers each year.In addition, nearly every subject field has its own specializedindexes and databases; ask the librarian for help.

Often you can read articles right on the computer screen.Otherwise make a list of the periodicals and pages you want,including the date. You may need to check the holdings file, thelist of periodicals your library carries. The article will beavailable in a bound volume, in a loose copy, or on microfilm.

See “A List of Valuable Sources” at the back of this book.

■ OTHER LIBRARY RESOURCES

Access to the Library from Home

Most college and many public libraries allow their subscribersaccess to databases from their home computers. You may needto install special software or enter your password or ID numberfor this service.

Media Section

Slides, filmstrips, videotapes, recordings, computer programs,and so forth are housed in the media section and indexed in thelibrary catalog.

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The Pamphlet File

Sometimes called the vertical file or clip file, the pamphlet filestores clippings and pamphlets. It is an especially good sourceof material pertaining to local areas such as your state or hometown. You’ll need to ask a librarian for access.

Interlibrary Loan

At your request and with enough time, your library can obtaincopies of books and photocopies of articles from other libraries.

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GETTING INFORMATION ONLINE

For most subjects, the Internet is increasingly the first place tolook for information. As in the college library, to make full useof the Internet you will need to master the use of search terms.For a review, see the chapter “Three Essential Research Skills.”

■ USE SEVERAL AVENUES OF INFORMATION

Most people rely on Google as their usual avenue onto the Web.As comprehensive as it is, however, Google won’t always list allthe websites most relevant to your topic. For thorough researchyou should explore a variety of ways to find information.

Search engines such as AltaVista and Yahoo allow you to searchthrough lists of subtopics or to type in a combination of searchterms. AltaVista’s “Advanced Search” has two features Googlelacks:

• You can specify words that are “near” (within ten words of)each other.

• You can specify the root of a word plus an asterisk (*) to getvariations of the word.

In any case, be sure to try several search engines.

Reference pages are assembled by researchers in a specificfield, providing links to information not necessarily covered bysearch engines. Some are listed on the homepages of searchengines; others can be found through Virtual Library at<www.vlib.org/Overview.html>, the homepages of libraries, orthe faculty pages at colleges and universities.

Research libraries such as the Library of Congress and the NewYork Public Library have websites that you can consult—givingyou the opportunity to look at major listings of books and insome cases databases as well. Use a search engine to find aspecific library, or check the comprehensive list at<www.library.usask.ca/hywebcat>.

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Homepages of colleges and universities can link you tolibraries and course materials developed by college faculty:reading lists, syllabuses, and so forth. You can find thesehomepages through search engines. Try using the name of aparticular college or your topic phrase plus “college.”

Government agencies and nonprofit organizations providevaluable statistics and other information through their websites.Use a search engine and add “government” to your searchterms. Look for websites with .gov or .org in their addresses.

News and entertainment organizations provide detailedinformation through their websites about a wide variety of topics.Some organizations, such as the New York Times and the ChristianScience Monitor, allow search and retrieval from their archives.

See “A List of Valuable Sources” at the back of this book.

SIZING UP A WEBSITE

Although there are many legitimate websites fromgovernment agencies and well-known sources, the qualityand accuracy of statements on the Internet vary widely. Noone checks or credits much of the information on the Web.

How a website looks—the quality of its graphics—doesn’tnecessarily indicate the quality of its information. Here aresome signs to look for:

Signs of a Questionable Website

• No author or organization listed on the page

• No date of last revision

• Typographical and grammatical errors

• Bias or one-sided information. Commercial sites (.com)have something to sell; organizations favoring one sideof a controversy may not present the other side fairly.Be skeptical and look for a variety of sources and views.

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Signs of a Reliable Website

• A well-known author or sponsoring organization

• Regular updating of the site

• Presentation of the topic in depth—rather than a sitefor children, for instance

• Links to good websites (and links to this one fromgood sites)

• Documentation of the sources of information used bythe author

■ CAUTIONS FOR RESEARCH

ON THE INTERNET

The Internet can take up all of your research time. If you’renot careful, you can get lost—adding too many subtopics orswitching to new topics until your project loses its shape andyou’ve run out of time. Researching electronically can becomemesmerizing, and you might find that at the end of a pleasantafternoon there is nothing to report. Allow a limited time—thirtyto sixty minutes—just to follow the links from different websites.

The Internet is not a substitute for reading. Be sure youbalance your Internet articles with books and periodicals. Manysubjects are absent or treated superficially on the Internet.

Websites are not like video games. They don’t necessarilyprogress to higher and higher levels. A good source might leadyou to a superficial or irrelevant source.

Remember to bookmark. You may never be able to return tosome sources you come across. Be methodical about adding“favorites” when using your own computer. When you’re usinganother computer, write down each Internet address with thetitle of the article.

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WRITING THE RESEARCH PAPER

You’ve collected all sorts of information. You have a folder,maybe even a box, full of notes. Now you have to decide whatto share with the reader. Are you going to just hand the readerthe box? You need to decide what’s most important to say.

■ WRITE A FIRST DRAFT

If you try to write your final paper in one draft, you putyourself under too much pressure to make everything perfectthe first time around.

Discover Your Own Perspective

After you have read and understood your sources, put yournotes, books, and magazines aside to find your own position onyour topic. Spend time freewriting or listing ideas until youknow what you think about the topic. Try to reduce yourcentral point to a single sentence—your preliminary thesis.

Organize Your Thoughts and Write a Quick First Draft

The trick to a good first draft is to write it without consultingyour notes. That way your paper will be in your own style, andyou will write only what is clear to you. Later you can consultyour notes for facts and quotations to add to your initial draft.

Without consulting your notes, develop a short informaloutline. Put all the major points you plan to make into alogical arrangement. Avoid merely giving a part of your paperto each source you read; instead, give a part to each of thepoints you want to make.

Write a draft of your entire paper. Do this also withoutconsulting your notes or your sources, just from memory. Besure to include a paragraph for each topic in your informaloutline. Explain information as you understand it; don’t checkthe details yet.

Write to persuade. Remember that you are the authority. Usethe facts that you remember to back up your position.Anticipate the reader’s questions and doubts, and respond tothem ahead of time.

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Don’t try for fancy words and long sentences. Tell what youknow, emphasizing in your own words what is most important.

Four Concerns You Can Defer Until Later

• The perfect introduction: Once you see how your papercomes out, you can go back and improve your introduction.

• Spelling and punctuation: Save this concern until therevision stage.

• Documentation: You will add this information to yoursecond draft.

• Length: You don’t have to aim for a certain length yet. Whenyou have a full first draft, you’ll begin to see whereinformation and explanations are needed.

■ INCORPORATE INFORMATION:QUOTATIONS, PARAPHRASE, SUMMARY, AND VISUALS

Once you have a first draft, you need to consult your notes.Read them and see which notes relate to the main points ofyour first draft. Select from your notes only the support youneed for your own points. Disregard material that does notpertain to your main points—it will only distract your reader.

General Guidelines for Incorporating Information

• Don’t download or copy hunks of information. Set yoursources aside and write information in your own words.

• Don’t overload your paragraphs with facts and quotations.

• Weave together several sources rather than using one sourceat a time.

• Lead into facts or quotations gracefully. Often it’s mosteffective to use the name of the author in your sentence.

According to D. M. Larsen, . . .Regina Schrambling, in “Tex-Mex Pizza,” tells how . . .

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• When you present a fact or quotation, relate it to the largerpoint you are making. In your own words, clarify theimportance of the fact or quotation.

• As you insert a fact, quotation, or opinion from a source,note the author and the exact page where you found it. ForAPA documentation style, also note the copyright date.

Balance the different ways of presenting information: directquotation, paraphrase, and summary. In addition, computers nowmake it easy to include photographs, charts, and other helpfulvisuals.

Direct Quotation

In direct quotation, you use the exact wording from your materialand surround the words with quotation marks. Even if you useonly a phrase or a key word, you must indicate that it has beentaken from another source by placing it within quotation marks.“Incorporating Quotations” (pages 79–80) gives strategies forusing quotations. “Quotation Marks” (pages 45–48) will help youwith the correct form for quotations.

Keep quotations secondary to your own ideas. Eachquotation should illustrate a definite point you want to make.Before and after the quotation, stress your point. Maintain yourown writing style throughout the paper.

Direct quotation is often overused in research papers. Don’tuse many quotations, and keep the ones you do use brief—twoor three lines at most. When you can, work a phrase from theauthor into your own sentence. Your paper should not be morethan 15 percent quotation.

• Do quote:

~ Memorable and distinctive phrases

~ Strong statements of opinion by authorities

• Do not quote:

~ Facts and statistics

He was born in 1945.

~ Standard terminology in a field

asthma velocity

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To avoid relying too heavily on quotation, make a point ofusing the other two methods of paraphrase and summary.

Paraphrase

When you paraphrase, you take someone else’s idea orinformation and put it into your own words. Usually youparaphrase one statement, not more than a few lines, at onetime. A good place for paraphrase, rather than quotation, is intelling basic facts: dates, statistics, places, and so forth. Thepitfall in paraphrasing comes when you stick too closely to yoursource’s phrasing, writing things you don’t fully understand inlanguage not really your own. Instead, read the passage(making sure you understand it), close the book, and write yourparaphrase in plain English.

You can’t half paraphrase. That is, if you mix in some of theauthor’s exact words, you must use quotation marks aroundthem.

Summary

When you summarize, you take a substantial amount ofmaterial and condense it. You can summarize a long passage,several pages, a chapter, or even an entire article or book. Usesummary when you want to acknowledge a conflicting idea orwhen you want to cover a related idea without too much detail.

Visuals

Visuals—charts, maps, drawings, photographs—cancommunicate a large amount of information in a small space.

• Don’t just stick in a visual for effect. First be certain thatthe illustration gives additional information or clarifies astatement in your paper. It has to have a purpose.

• Be sure that your illustration is clear. Enlarge it if you need to.

• Give each visual a caption and place it into the text right atthe point where you have discussed it; however, if thevisuals will be too disruptive to the paper, add them in anappendix at the end.

• Give the source of the illustration if you did not create it.(For proper documentation, see pages 134–135 and 142.)

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■ PREPARE YOUR FINAL PAPER

Revise Your Essay

Copying over a first draft is not revising. Work on the followingaspects of your paper:

• Make sure that you have written clearly, not in an artificialstyle.

• Be sure that each paragraph has one clear point and islogically connected to the paragraphs before and after it.Omit or move information that doesn’t fit with aparagraph’s main point.

• Look for places where the reader will need moreexplanation to follow your point.

• Check for smoothness leading into and out of directquotations, paraphrases, and summaries.

Edit Your Essay

Patiently examine the following aspects of your paper:

• Accuracy of quotations, numbers, and the spelling of names

• Accuracy and format of documentation

• Manuscript format (See the chapter “Format of CollegePapers,” pages 94–96.)

Proofread your paper both on the screen and on the finalprinted copy.

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PLAGIARISM (CHEATING)

Penalties for plagiarism can be severe: failure of the course orexpulsion from the college. Unintentional plagiarism is stillplagiarism, so be careful and know the rules.

Plagiarism means writing facts, quotations, or opinions that you gotfrom someone else without identifying your source; or using someoneelse’s words without putting quotation marks around them.

To Avoid Plagiarizing

• Always give credit for a fact, quotation, or opinion whetheryou read it, retrieved it electronically, saw it on television,heard it on the radio, or learned it from another person—even when you use your own wording.

• When you use another person’s wording—even a phrase—always put quotation marks around the person’s exactwords.

• Write your first draft with your books closed. Do not writewith a book, printout, or magazine open next to you. Don’tgo back and forth taking ideas from a source and writingyour paper.

• Don’t copy and paste downloaded material. Read it andthen tell the point in your own words; if you wish to quotean exact phrase or sentence, put it in quotation marks.Either way—summarized or quoted—be sure to cite itssource in your paper.

• Don’t let your sources take over the essay. Tell what youknow well in your own style, stressing what you find mostimportant.

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WHAT IS DOCUMENTATION?

The word documentation means that you have added twoelements to your paper:

• In the body of your paper, right after you presentinformation, you give a brief citation identifying the sourceof that information.

• At the end of your paper, you provide a separate page witha detailed list of your sources, in alphabetical order. This listis called Works Cited, References, or Bibliography.

When to Give Your Source

You must acknowledge in your paper the source of

• A direct quotation

• A statistic

• An idea

• Someone else’s opinion

• Information taken from the computer

• Concrete facts

• Illustrations, photographs, or charts—if not your own or ifcreated from published materials

• Information not commonly known

Even if you paraphrase (put someone else’s words into yourown words) or summarize (condense someone else’s words orideas), you still must acknowledge the source of yourinformation.

On many websites, you will notice a line from the authorgranting permission to reproduce the material for personal oreducational use. However, you still have to give that authorcredit.

If a fact is common knowledge (George Washington was thefirst president), you don’t have to give your source.

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How Often to Give Your Source

When several facts in a row within one paragraph all comefrom the same page of a source, use one citation to cover themall. Place the citation after the last fact, but alert the reader at theoutset with a phrase such as “According to Janet Tynan, . . .”

Do not, however, wait more than a few lines to let the readerknow where the facts came from. The citation must be in thesame paragraph as the facts.

Remember: You must give citations for information, not just forquotations.

How to Give Your Source

Different subject areas use different methods of documentation.Be sure to find out from your professor which method ispreferable for that subject. Three basic styles of documentationare used most frequently. They all employ similar formats forthe list of sources at the end of the paper, but they differ in theformat they use for citations in the body of the paper:

• MLA (Modern Language Association)—used in English andliterature courses

• APA (American Psychological Association)—used in thenatural sciences and social sciences

• Footnotes (Chicago Style)—used in journalism, art, andhistory courses

The following chapters present these three styles.

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DOCUMENTATION: THE MLA STYLE

HOW TO USE PARENTHETICAL CITATION

The MLA (Modern Language Association) style ofdocumentation is used for courses in English and in foreignlanguages.

MLA style uses parenthetical citation. In this system you giveyour source in parentheses immediately after you give theinformation. Your reader can then find the complete listing ofeach source at the end of the paper in your Works Cited section.

The four most common citations are

• Author and page number

• Title and page number

• Page number only

• Secondhand quotations

For any citation it is crucial that the first word of the citationmatch the first word of the corresponding entry on your WorksCited page in the back of your paper.

Author and Page Number

Put the author’s last name and the page number in parenthesesimmediately after the information:

(Schrambling 125).

Notice that there is no “p.” and no comma. In the text it lookslike this:

Tex-Mex flavored pizza has become very popular

(Schrambling 125).

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If your citation comes at the end of a sentence, the period goesoutside the last parenthesis. (Exception: With indentedquotations, the period goes before the parenthesis.)

Where a page number is not available, give the number of asection (sec.), paragraph (para.), or line (l.) if possible.

Title and Page Number

Often articles, editorials, pamphlets, and other materials haveno author listed. In such cases, give only the first distinctiveword of the title followed by the page number:

The actual fat content of a frozen pizza may be

more than the package claims (“A Meal” 19).

Note that you give the title of the specific article that you read,not the title of the newspaper, magazine, or reference book (“AMeal” not Consumer Reports).

Page Number Only

Put only the page number in parentheses when you havealready mentioned the author’s name.

Jim Cohen makes low-fat pizzas “from start to

finish on the grill” (93).

When possible, use this method of citation. Mentioning theauthor’s name as you present information makes your papermore cohesive and readable.

Secondhand Quotations

When you quote someone who has been quoted in one of yoursources, use qtd. in (quoted in):

Evelyne Slomon, author of numerous cookbooks,

refers to the years between 1920 and the early

‘50s as the “golden age of pizza in America”

(qtd. in O’Neill 59).

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In this example Slomon said it, although you found it inO’Neill. Note that Slomon will not be listed in your WorksCited; O’Neill will be.

Special Cases

Electronic Sources

• Articles and books originally in print

For sources originally in print but read on the screen orprinted from the computer, follow the same format as youwould for the printed versions, but without page numbers.In your Works Cited you will indicate where you found thesource—either the Internet address or the name of thedatabase.

An Ohio pizzeria now offers a low-carbohydrate

pizza with a thin crust made with soy protein

(Crane).

• Other electronic sources—including websites, onlinepostings, videos, and television or radio programs

Most electronic sources do not have page numbers. Youmay give the name in parentheses, but you can be moreprecise by indicating the format and incorporating thespeaker or organization smoothly into your sentence.

In an online posting, Mary Filmore suggests a

nutritious “grilled garden pizza.”

Interview or Speech

If your source is an interview, lecture, or speech, include theperson’s name and position in your paragraph and use noparenthetical citation.

Kevin O’Reilly, owner of K. O’Reilly’s Pizza,

reports that pepperoni pizza outsells the low-

fat versions ten to one.

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Professor Carlo Mangoni, who teaches nutrition

at the Second University of Naples, said in a

radio interview that there are only two classic

pizzas—the marinara and the margherita.

Two Sources by the Same Author

When you have two or more sources by the same author, usethe first identifying words to indicate the title of the workyou’re citing.

Julia Child advises that the dough be chilled to

slow the rising (In Julia’s 6).

or

Some chefs chill the dough to slow the rising

(Child, In Julia’s 6).

Organization as Author

Sometimes the author is an organization.

According to the United States Department of

Agriculture, one slice of cheese pizza has

255 calories (1).

or

One slice of cheese pizza has 255 calories

(United States Dept. of Agriculture 1).

Note: Do not abbreviate in your sentence—only in theparenthetical citation.

Illustration or Graphics

Citations for illustrations and graphics go in parentheses belowthe graphic.

• If the artist’s name is given and the visual (such as aneditorial cartoon) is not an illustration of the textsurrounding it, give the last name and page number.

(Chaney 69).

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• If the artist’s name is given but the visual illustrates the textwith which it appears, give the artist’s name and then theauthor’s name and the page.

(Acevedo in Cohen 97).

Note that only Cohen will be listed in your Works Cited.

• If the artist is not identified (for instance, in anadvertisement) give the author (or owner of the copyright)and page where the illustration appeared.

(Kraft Foods 5).

SAMPLE PARAGRAPH USING CITATIONS

The following paragraph is a sample paragraph in which youcan see how various citations are used. (You will rarely havethis many citations in one short paragraph.) The sources citedhere can be found among the works cited on page 145.

When the first pizzeria opened in New York City

in 1905, it introduced the classic Italian pizza—bread

dough covered with tomato sauce and cheese (“Pizza”

490). Now, almost a century later, the American pizza

reflects this country’s love of diversity. In addition

to the classic version, pizza lovers can now savor

just about every combination and concoction

imaginable. The National Association of Pizza

Operators reports that

Pizza makers have tried virtually every type

of food on pizzas, including peanut butter

and jelly, bacon and eggs, and mashed

potatoes. (qtd. in “A Meal” 21)

Gourmet versions, such as the Tex-Mex, which Regina

Schrambling says is “welcomed by most Americans,”

continue to satisfy our taste for the unusual (125).

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From France comes the pissaladière, which adds fresh

herbs, black olives, and anchovies (Child, Bertholle,

and Beck 151). Even America’s exports reflect our

adaptability; for example, Domino’s uses pickled ginger

and chicken on its pizzas in India (Crossette 2). You

might have to travel to Italy to get real Italian

pizza; but you can eat your way across this country—and

the world—sampling several hundred modern versions of

pizza made the American way.

■ WORKS CITED

When you were gathering your material, you may have used a“working bibliography,” a list of potential sources. However,now that you have written your paper and have seen whichsources you actually did use, you must include a separate pageat the end of the paper listing your Works Cited.

There are four major points to understand about a Works Citedpage:

• List only those sources that you actually referred to in yourpaper.

• List the whole article, or essay, or book—not just the pagesyou used.

• Alphabetize your list of sources by the authors’ last names. Ifno author is listed, alphabetize by the first main word in thetitle.

• Format is extremely important to many teachers. Pay specialattention to order, spacing, and punctuation.

~ Put the author’s last name first.

~ Double-space the entire list.

~ Start each entry at the left margin.

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~ Indent the second and third lines of each entry fivespaces.

~ Notice that most of the items in a citation are separatedby periods.

~ Underline titles of books, periodicals, and websites;place quotation marks around titles of articles, chapters,and individual sections of websites.

~ Leave one space after a comma, colon, or period.

~ Put a period at the end of each entry.

Examples of the format for specific entries follow. A sampleWorks Cited appears on page 145.

SPECIFIC ENTRIES

Book

Author. Title. City: Publisher, date.

Love, Louise. The Complete Book of Pizza.

Evanston, IL: Sassafras, 1980.

Note: If the city of publication is not well known, give the two-letter Post Office abbreviation for the state, without periods.

Article in a Magazine

Author. “Title of Article.” Title of Periodical Date: page(s).

Schrambling, Regina. “Tex-Mex Pizza.” Working

Woman Feb. 1988: 125.

Article in a Newspaper

Author (if given). “Title of Article.” Title of NewspaperComplete date, name of edition (if given), section numberor title: page(s).

Crossette, Barbara. “Burgers Are the Globe’s

Fast Food? Not So Fast.” New York Times

26 Nov. 2000, late ed., sec. 4:2.

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If the section is designated by a letter instead of a number or aname, put the colon after the date and then give the sectionletter before the page number.

26 Nov. 2000: A12.

When an article covers more than one page, use a comma to jointwo sequential numbers (36, 37) or a hyphen to join the first andlast of more than two continuous numbers (36–39); otherwise,use + (36+).

Article or Story in a Collection or Anthology

Author of article. “Title of Article.” Title of Book. Editor of book.City: Publisher, date. Pages covered by article.

Cook, Joan Marble. “Italy: Myths and Truths.”

Italy. Ed. Ronald Steel. New York: Wilson,

1963. 31–37.

Article in a Scholarly Journal

Author. “Title of Article.” Title of Journal Volume number(Complete date): pages covered by article.

Larsen, D. M., et al. “The Effects of Flour Type

and Dough Retardation Time on Sensory

Characteristics of Pizza Crust.” Cereal

Chemistry 70 (Nov.–Dec. 1993): 647–50.

Material from Computers

When an article or book appeared originally in print, give allthe publication information in the same format required for theprint version and then add specific information about thedatabase or website.

If complete information about your source is not available—forexample, the name of the author—just list whateverinformation you have, in the order given below, without blankspaces.

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Article Originally in Print Found through Library Computer System

Information for print version. Information service. Name andlocation of library. Date accessed.

Crane, Julianne. “The World According to Carbs.”

Spokane Spokesman-Review. 8 Feb. 2004,

sec. In Food: D1. Lexis-Nexis. Nassau

Community College Lib., Garden City, NY.

1 May 2004.

Website

Author or organization. “Title of section, if given.” Title of thecomplete work. Date of publication or last revision.Sponsoring organization if different from author. Date youviewed it <address of the website>.

United States. Dept. of Agriculture. “Calories

and Weight: The USDA Pocket Guide.” Eating

Right . . . The Dietary Guidelines Way.

Mar. 1990. Hopkins Technology. 1 May. 2004

<http://www.hoptechno.com/book20.htm>.

Direct E-mail to You (not a discussion group)

Author of e-mail [title or area of expertise, professionalaffiliation]. “Subject line.” E-mail to the author (meaningyou). Date.

Brooks, Evelyn [Marketing researcher, Moorpark,

CA, Food Association]. “Re: Pizza.” E-mail

to the author. 7 May 2004.

Posting to a Discussion Group

Real name of author. “The subject line of the article.” Onlineposting. The date of the posting. The group to which it wassent—if there are multiple groups separate them by acomma. Date you viewed it <where the article can beretrieved>.

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Filmore, Mary. “Grilled Pizza (6) Collection.”

Online Posting. 23 June 2002.

rec.food.recipes. 2 May 2004

<http://groups/google.com>.

Encyclopedia

“Title of Article.” Title of Encyclopedia. Number of edition (ifgiven). Year.

“Pizza.” Encyclopaedia Britannica: Micropaedia.

15th ed. 2002.

Special Cases

No Author Listed

Alphabetize according to the first main word of the title.Include A, An, The, but do not use them when alphabetizing.For example, this article will be alphabetized with M in theWorks Cited:

“A Meal That’s Easy as Pie: How to Pick a Pizza

That’s Good and Healthful.” Consumer

Reports Jan. 1997: 19–23.

Two or More Authors

Give the last name first for the first author only; use first namefirst for the other author(s).

Child, Julia, Louisette Bertholle, and Simone

Beck. Mastering the Art of French Cooking.

Vol. 1. New York: Knopf, 1966.

Additional Works by the Same Author

Use three hyphens and a period in place of the author’s nameand alphabetize the works by title.

Child, Julia. From Julia Child’s Kitchen. New

York: Knopf, 1979.

---. In Julia’s Kitchen with Master Chefs. New

York: Knopf, 1995.

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Pamphlet

Follow the format for a book. Often an organization is thepublisher. If no author is listed, begin with the title. If no date islisted, use n.d. for no date.

United States. Dept. of Agriculture. Eating

Better When Eating Out: Using the Dietary

Guidelines. Washington: GPO, n.d.

Radio or Television Program

Give the title of the episode (if available) in quotation marks.Underline the title of the program. Give the network, if any,then the station call letters and city. Then list the date of thebroadcast.

“Cooking: Crispy Prosciutto and Parsley Pizza.”

Martha Stewart Living. CBS. WCBS TV, New

York. 30 Apr. 2003.

Videocassette or Audio Recording

List the author, director, or performer; the title; the format; thedistributor; and the release date.

Smith, Jeff. Frugal Gourmet: Sauces and

Seasonings—Garlic! Garlic! Videocassette.

Mpi Home Video, 1992.

Interview, Speech, or Lecture

Give the person’s name and position, the kind of presentation(type of interview, speech, or classroom lecture), the location,and the date.

Mangoni, Carlo. Interview with Scott Simon.

Weekend Edition Saturday. Natl. Public

Radio. WNYC FM, New York. 31 May 1997.

O’Reilly, Kevin [Owner, K O’Reilly’s Pizza].

Personal interview. Troy, MO. 2 May 2004.

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Illustration or Graphics

• If the artist’s name is given and the visual (such as aneditorial cartoon) is not an illustration of the textsurrounding it, give the artist’s name, the type of visual it is(cartoon, photograph, chart), and the complete informationfor the source in which it appears, including the dateviewed or the page.

Stevens, Mick. Cartoon. New Yorker 8 June 1992:

63.

• If the artist’s name is given but the visual illustrates the textwith which it appears, give only the author and otherinformation for the text.

Cohen, Jim. “Simple, Healthful Grilling.” Food &

Wine June 1997: 92–98+.

• If the artist is not identified (for instance, in anadvertisement) give the author (or owner of the copyright)and complete information on the source, including the pagewhere the illustration appeared.

Kraft Foods. Advertisement. Eating Well

July/Aug. 1997: 5.

Cedarlane Natural Foods. Chart. “Nutrition Facts.”

Low Fat Pizza Veggie Wraps. 31 July 1997.

3 May 2004 <http://www.cedarlanefoods.com/

p00ag_nf.htm>.

• If you found the image through Google or a library service,give the artist or copyright holder, the name of the serviceplus the categories you used (in order, separated by >), the date you viewed it, and the Web address or identifyingnumber.

Presbyterian Healthcare Services. Google Image

Search > pizza. 3 May 2004 <www.phs.org/

healthyliving/recipes/2002/pizza.htm>.

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Missing Information

Use the following abbreviations to denote missing information:

no date of publication given n.d.

no place of publication or no publisher n.p.

no page numbers n. pag.

■ SAMPLE WORKS CITED PAGE

The Works Cited page on page 145 illustrates a variety ofsources and therefore is longer than you probably will need.The left-hand page identifies the category of each source.

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Explanations of Works Cited

Book, single author

Repeated author (same author as above)

Book, three authors, one volume cited, (repeated author withfirst citing of co-authors)

Article or chapter in an edited collection [Use this form also fora single selection from an anthology.]

Article originally in print found through library computerservice

Newspaper article

Article in a scholarly journal, more than three authors

Magazine article (monthly), unsigned

Encyclopedia article, unsigned

Magazine article, signed

Article on the Internet, organization as author

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Works Cited

Child, Julia. From Julia Child’s Kitchen. New York:

Knopf, 1979.

---. In Julia’s Kitchen with Master Chefs. New York:

Knopf, 1995.

Child, Julia, Louisette Bertholle, and Simone Beck.

Mastering the Art of French Cooking. Vol. 1. New

York: Knopf, 1966.

Cook, Joan Marble. “Italy: Myths and Truths.” Italy.

Ed. Ronald Steel. New York: Wilson, 1963. 31–37.

Crane, Julianne. “The World According to Carbs.”

Spokane Spokesman-Review. 8 Feb. 2004, sec. In

Food: D1. Lexis-Nexis. Nassau Community College

Lib., Garden City, NY. 1 May 2004.

Crossette, Barbara. “Burgers Are the Globe’s Fast

Food? Not So Fast.” New York Times 26 Nov. 2000,

late ed., sec. 4:2.

Larsen, D. M., et al. “The Effects of Flour Type and

Dough Retardation Time on Sensory Characteristics of

Pizza Crust.” Cereal Chemistry 70 (1993): 647–50.

“A Meal That’s Easy as Pie: How to Pick a Pizza That’s

Good and Healthful.” Consumer Reports Jan. 1997:

19–23.

“Pizza.” Encyclopaedia Britannica: Micropaedia. 15th

ed. 2002.

Schrambling, Regina. “Tex-Mex Pizza.” Working Woman

Feb. 1988: 125.

United States. Dept. of Agriculture. “Calories and

Weight: The USDA Pocket Guide.” Eating Right. . .

The Dietary Guidelines Way. Mar. 1990. Hopkins

Technology. 1 May 2004 <http:www.hoptechno.com/

book20.htm>.

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DOCUMENTATION: THE APA STYLE

The APA (American Psychological Association) style is used forcourses in the social sciences, such as psychology, sociology,anthropology, and economics, and for some of the life sciences(consult your professor).

This style places the last name of the author and the date ofpublication in parentheses immediately after any researchinformation. At the end of the paper, a complete list of sources(References) provides the details about the particular books,articles, and other documents you used.

■ PARENTHETICAL CITATIONS

For the basics of using parenthetical citations, see pages 131–133.

Here are the most common forms for APA style:

For Books and Articles: Author and Date of Publication

The preferred form is to use the author’s last name in yoursentence, followed by the date of publication in parentheses:

Schrambling (1988, February) described the

popularity of Tex-Mex flavored pizza.

Note that in APA style, the author’s work is referred to in thepast tense (“described”).

When the author is not mentioned in your sentence, theparentheses will contain both the author’s last name and thedate of publication.

Tex-Mex pizza became very popular in the 1980s

(Schrambling, 1988, February).

If no author is listed, give only the first distinctive word of thetitle, followed by the date of publication. Give the title of the

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specific article that you read, not the title of the newspaper,magazine, or reference book.

For Direct Quotations: Page Number

For a direct quotation, give the page number, with theabbreviation p. or pp. after the date.

Cohen (1997, June, p. 93) made low-fat pizzas

“from start to finish on the grill.”

APA does not require the page number for a paraphrase butrecommends it if the source is more than a few pages long.

For Secondhand Quotations

When you quote or paraphrase someone who has been quotedin one of your sources, use as cited in:

Slomon, author of numerous cookbooks, referred

to the years between 1920 and the early ‘50s as

the “golden age of pizza in America” (as cited

in O’Neill, 1997, p. 59).

In this example, Slomon said it, although you found it inO’Neill. Note that Slomon will not be listed in your References;O’Neill will be.

Special Cases

Websites

When you have used an entire website as a general reference,refer to the website in your sentence and give its address inparentheses:

Domino’s Pizza posted nutritional information on

its website (http:hotpizza2u.com).

Articles and Books Originally in Print but RetrievedElectronically

If the article or book appeared in print first, cite the author andoriginal date of publication, even if you read the materialonline.

APA

Personal Communications (E-mails, Interviews, Lectures)

When your source communicated with you personally, write, inparentheses, personal communication and the date (month day,year):

O’Reilly, owner of K. O’Reilly’s Pizza, reported

that pepperoni pizza outsells the low-fat

versions ten to one (personal communication,

May 2, 2004).

More than One Author

For two authors, join the last names with and if you refer tothem in your sentence or with an ampersand (&) if you citethem in parentheses. For three to six authors, give all thenames for the first reference. Thereafter, use only the last nameof the first author plus et al. (meaning “and others”). For morethan six authors, give only the last name of the first authorplus et al.

Two Sources by the Same Author

When you have two or more sources by one author, thedifferent dates will indicate the different sources. When twosources by the same author have the same date, put a lowercaseletter after the date to distinguish the source—Jones 1994a,Jones 1994b, and so on. Use the alphabetical order of the titles toassign letters.

SAMPLE PARAGRAPH USING CITATIONS

In the following paragraph, you can see how various citationsare used. (You will rarely have this many citations in one shortparagraph.) The sources cited here can be found among thereferences on page 154.

When the first pizzeria opened in New York City

in 1905, it introduced the classic Italian pizza—bread

dough covered with tomato sauce and cheese (Pizza

2002). Now, almost a century later, the simple pizza

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has been transformed into an American creation that

reflects this country’s love of diversity. In addition

to the classic version, pizza lovers can now savor

just about every combination and concoction

imaginable. The National Association of Pizza

Operators reported that “Pizza makers have tried

virtually every type of food on pizzas, including

peanut butter and jelly, bacon and eggs, and mashed

potatoes” (as cited in A meal 1997, January, p. 21).

Gourmet versions, such as the Tex-Mex, which

Schrambling (1988, February, p. 125) said is “welcomed

by most Americans,” continue to satisfy our taste for

the unusual. From France comes the pissaladière, which

adds fresh herbs, black olives, and anchovies (Child,

Bertholle, & Beck, 1966, p. 151). Even America’s

exports reflect our adaptability; for example,

Domino’s uses pickled ginger and chicken on its pizzas

in India (Crossette, 2000, November 26). You might

have to travel to Italy to get real Italian pizza; but

you can eat your way across this country—and the

world—sampling several hundred modern versions of

pizza made the American way.

■ REFERENCES

At the end of your paper, on a separate page, you will list thesources that were mentioned in your paper or cited inparentheses. For the basic rules of Reference pages, see thesection on “Works Cited” in the chapter on the MLA style ofdocumentation, pages 136–137. In addition, the following rulesapply:

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Heading

The list is titled References. It should be centered, capitalizingonly the first letter, with no underline, boldface, or quotationmarks.

Authors’ Names

• Alphabetize the list by authors’ last names. Give only theinitials for the first and middle names of authors. Give allnames in reverse order, even for multiple authors. List allauthors up to six, and then use et al. (meaning and others).

• For authors who have written more than one work, repeatthe name for each entry. List the works in chronologicalorder. If the works have the same date, add a letter to thedate—2000a, 2000b, and so on—putting the titles inalphabetical order.

• If no author is listed, begin your entry with the title (butalphabetize by the first main word of the title—not The, A,or An).

Date of Publication

The date of publication for each entry is placed withinparentheses right after the author’s name (or after the title if noauthor is listed). For articles and other sources that indicatemonth or month and day, include this information—year,month day—without abbreviations.

Titles

• Capitalize only the first word of most titles and subtitles,but capitalize all main words of titles of newspapers,magazines, and scholarly journals.

• Use italics for the titles of books, newspapers, magazines,CD-ROMs, and websites. Titles of shorter works that appearinside the larger ones, such as articles and chapters, areprinted without underlines, italics, or quotation marks.

Publisher

Do not abbreviate publishers’ names; do abbreviate and with &.Do not include “Co.,” “Inc.,” or “Publisher,” but do include“University” and “Press.”

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Pages

Use p. or pp. to indicate the pages for articles in periodicals orchapters in books.

SPECIFIC ENTRIES

For formats not listed, adapt the form for the MLA style.

Book or Pamphlet

Author (Date). Title. City: Publisher.

Love, L. (1980). The complete book of pizza.

Evanston, IL: Sassafras.

Article in a Magazine or Newspaper

Author (complete date, year first). Title of article. Title ofPeriodical, section (for newspapers): page(s).

Crossette, B. (2000, November 26). Burgers are

the globe’s fast food? Not so fast. The

New York Times, section 4:2.

Article in a Collection or Anthology

Author of article (date). Title of article. In Editor of book (Ed.),Title of book (pages covered by article). City: Publisher.

Cook, J. M. (1963). Italy: Myths and truths. In

R. Steele (Ed.), Italy. (pp. 31–37). New

York: Wilson.

Article in a Scholarly Journal

Author (date). Title of article. Title of Journal Volume number:pages covered by article.

Larsen, D. M., et al. (1993). The effects of

flour type and dough retardation time on

sensory characteristics of pizza crust.

Cereal Chemistry 70: pp. 647–650.

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Personal Communication (Interview, Speech, Lecture, or E-mail)

In the APA style, you do not list any personal communicationsin your references because no one else can review the source.Do indicate the source clearly in your paper—see “PersonalCommunications,” page 148.

Encyclopedia

Author of article if given. (date). Title of article. In Title ofencyclopedia (Volume number, pages covered by article).City: Publisher.

Pizza. (2002). In The new encyclopaedia

Britannica (Vol. 9, p. 490). Chicago:

Encyclopaedia Britannica.

Material from Computers

If complete information about your source is not available—forexample, the name of the author—just list whatever informationyou have, in the order given below, without blank spaces.

Print Source Retrieved Online

Author or organization. (date of publication or last revision).Title of the article (if appropriate). Title of the CompletePublication. Pages or publishing information. Retrieveddate from address of the website

Blethen, C. (February 23, 2004). Pizzerias add

high-protein, no-crust options. Seattle

Times. Section Diet and Fitness. Retrieved

May 2, 2004, from http://seattletimes

.nwsource.com/html/dietandfitness/

2001862165_pizza21.html

The “retrieved” date is the date you viewed it. Notice that youdo not place a period after the Internet address.

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Article Originally in Print, Found through Library Computer System

Information for print version. Retrieved date [that you read it]from Title database.

Crane, J. (February 8, 2004). The world

according to carbs. Spokane Spokesman-

Review. Section In Food: D1. Retrieved

May 1, 2004, from Lexis-Nexis database.

Specific Document on a Website

Author or organization (if known). (Date of publication or lastrevision). Title of the article. Title of the Complete Work.Retrieved date from address of the website.

U.S. Department of Agriculture. (1990, March).

Calories and weight: The USDA pocket

guide. Eating Right . . . The Dietary

Guidelines Way. Retrieved May 1, 2004 from

http:www.hoptechno.com/book20.htm

Entire Website

In the APA style, give the address of the website in parenthesesat the end of your sentence—see “Website,” page 147. Do notgive the Web address in your reference list.

Posting to a Discussion Group

Name of author. (Date of the posting). Subject line of themessage. [Msg. number]. Posted to name of group [Notethat there is no final period]

Filmore, M. (2002, June 23). Grilled pizza (6)

collection [Msg137]. Message posted to

rec.food.recipes

The following page includes the references for the sampleparagraph on pages 148–149.

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References

Child, J. (1995). In Julia’s kitchen with master

chefs. New York: Knopf.

Child, J. (2000). Julia’s kitchen wisdom: Essential

techniques and recipes from a lifetime of cooking.

New York: Knopf.

Child, J., Bertholle, L., and Beck, S. (1966). Mastering

the art of French cooking. Vol. 1. New York: Knopf.

Cook, J. M. (1963). Italy: Myths and truths. In R.

Steele (Ed.), Italy. (pp. 31–37). New York: Wilson.

Crane, J. (February 8, 2004). The world according to

carbs. Spokane Spokesman-Review. Section In Food:

D1. Retrieved May 1, 2004, from Lexis-Nexis

database.

Crossette, B. (2000, November 26). Burgers are the

globe’s fast food? Not so fast. The New York Times,

section 4:2.

Larsen, D. M., et al. (1993). The effects of flour type

and dough retardation time on sensory

characteristics of pizza crust. Cereal Chemistry

70, 647–50.

A meal that’s easy as pie: How to pick a pizza that’s

good and healthful. (1997, January). Consumer

Reports 62, 19–23.

Pizza. (2002). In The new encyclopaedia Britannica

(Vol. 9, p. 490). Chicago: Encyclopaedia Britannica.

Schrambling, R. (1988, February). Tex-Mex pizza.

Working Woman, 125.

U.S. Department of Agriculture. (1990, March).

Calories and weight: The USDA pocket guide. Eating

Right . . . The Dietary Guidelines Way. Retrieved

May 1, 2004 from http:www.hoptechno.com/book20.htm

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DOCUMENTATION: THE CHICAGO

STYLE (FOOTNOTES)

This traditional system is the best choice for a report for ageneral audience; for courses in art, business, communications,dance, journalism, law, music, theater, history, or politicalscience; and for cross-disciplinary courses.

With footnotes, you place a raised numeral in your paper everytime you present information from your research—either at theend of the summary, paraphrase, or quotation (after the quotationmarks), or within the sentence, right after the fact or statistic. Theraised numeral is then repeated at the bottom of that page (see theexample below), with the specific source of the information.

The numbers for this footnoting system are continuous; that is,you begin with the number one and progress, using the nextnumber each time you document a fact or quotation from yourresearch. Thus, one source may be referred to several times, buteach new use of material from that source will have a newnumber. After the first complete footnote, subsequent footnotesfor that source give only the last name of the author and theappropriate page number.

The advantages of this system are that

• If readers are curious about the source, they can easilyglance down to the bottom of the page.

• The writer of the paper can make interpretive orexplanatory comments.1

Computers simplify this system of presenting sources. In mostword processing programs, you can indicate where you wantthe number to be inserted, specify whether you want a footnoteor endnote, and then type the content of each note as you gothrough the documentation of your paper. The computer willautomatically format the notes and will keep track of yoursequence of numbers both during composition and revision.

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1. The footnote can add a comment that would

otherwise clutter up your paper.

■ FORMAT FOR FOOTNOTES

If your word processing program does not format footnotesautomatically, follow these guidelines:

• Footnotes begin at the bottom of the page—four lines belowthe last line of text—and correspond to the numbers givenin the text on that page.

• First draw a two-inch line (twelve strokes of the underlinekey) and skip a line.

• Indent five spaces and give the appropriate numeral, notraised, in normal font, followed by a period and a space.Subsequent lines within each entry begin at the leftmargin.

Short Form for Footnotes

In Chicago Style, because you have a bibliography, yourfootnotes can simply give the author’s last name and pagenumber (if available). If no author is listed, give a brief form ofthe title.

If your teacher requires complete information in your footnotes,use the following forms.

For Books

• Give the name of the author, first name first, followed by acomma and a space.

• Give the title, italicized, followed by a space. Give the nameof an editor or a number for the edition, if necessary, after acomma; otherwise use no punctuation.

• After an opening parenthesis, give first the city ofpublication, followed by a colon and one space.

• Then give the name of the publisher, followed by a commaand one space.

• Give the date of copyright, then a closing parenthesis,followed by a comma, then a space.

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• Give the page number(s), without p. or pp. End the entrywith a period.

2. Louise Love, The Complete Book of Pizza

(Evanston, IL: Sassafras, 1980), 35.

For Articles

• Give the name of the author, if given, first name first,followed by a comma and a space.

• Give the title of the article in quotation marks, with acomma inside the closing quotation mark.

• After one space, give the title of the periodical, italicizedand followed by no punctuation.

• Give the volume number for scholarly journals and enclosethe date in parentheses, followed by a comma.

3. “Cooking School: Pizza,” The Magazine of La

Cucina Italiana 5 (July/August 2000), 102.

• Give the date of a nonscholarly periodical—month, day, andyear—in parentheses and followed by a colon and onespace.

4. Amy Scherber, “Pizza with a ‘Push Button’

Crust,” The New York Times (September 15, 1999).

• Give the page number(s) followed by a period formagazines. Do not give page numbers for newspapersbecause different editions often have different pagenumbers.

For Websites

• Give the name of the author, first name first, followed by aperiod and a space. If no author is listed, give the name ofthe sponsoring organization if known.

• Give the title of the article if it is part of a larger website.Use quotation marks with a comma inside the closingquotation mark.

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• Give the title of the website without italics or quotationmarks, followed by a comma. However, use italics for titlesof websites of online journals and news services.

• Give the date, followed by a comma.

• Give the address of the website.

• In parentheses, write accessed and the date you viewed it.Add a period after the closing parenthesis.

5. U.S. Department of Agriculture. “Calories and

Weight: The USDA Pocket Guide,” Eating Right . . .

The Dietary Guidelines Way, March 1990,

http:www.hoptechno.com/book20.htm (accessed

May 1, 2004).

6. Julianne Crane, “The World According to

Carbs,” Spokane Spokesman-Review (February 8,

2004), Lexis-Nexis (accessed May 1, 2004).

For an Article Originally in Print, Found through LibraryComputer System

• Give the information for the article in the print version.

• Give the name of the library service (for example, InfoTrac).

• In parentheses, write accessed and the date you viewed it.Add a period after the closing parenthesis.

For Personal Communications (Personal Interview, Email)

Give the name, the type of communication, and the date.

For Repeated Sources

Once a footnote has given the full information for a source,subsequent footnotes for that source give only the last name ofthe author (or a short form of the title when no author is given)plus the page number.

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Here is an example of a paragraph using footnotes. Check thenumerals and the matching footnotes at the bottom of the page:

When the first pizzeria opened in New York City

in 1905, it introduced the classic Italian pizza—bread

dough covered with tomato sauce and cheese.1 Now,

almost a century later, the simple pizza has been

transformed into an American creation that reflects

this country’s love of diversity. In addition to the

classic version, pizza lovers can now savor just about

every combination and concoction imaginable. The

National Association of Pizza Operators reports:

Pizza makers have tried virtually every type of

food on pizzas, including peanut butter and jelly,

bacon and eggs, and mashed potatoes.2

Gourmet versions, such as the Tex-Mex, which

Regina Schrambling says is “welcomed by most

Americans,” continue to satisfy our taste for the

unusual.3 From France comes the pissaladière, which

adds fresh herbs, black olives, and anchovies.4 Even

America’s exports reflect our adaptability; for

example, Domino’s uses pickled ginger and chicken on

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1. Encyclopaedia Britannica: Micropaedia. 2002 ed.

s.v. “Pizza.”

2. Quoted in “A Meal That’s Easy as Pie: How to Pick a

Pizza That’s Good and Healthful,” Consumer Reports

(January 1997): 19–23.

3. Regina Schrambling, “Tex-Mex Pizza,” Working Woman

(February 1988): 125.

4. Julia Child, Louisette Bertholle, and Simone Beck,

Mastering the Art of French Cooking, vol. 1 (New York:

Knopf, 1966), 151.

its pizzas in India.5 You might have to travel to Italy

to get real Italian pizza; but you can eat your way

across this country—and the world—sampling several

hundred modern versions of pizza made the American way.

■ A VARIATION: ENDNOTES

This system is the same as the footnote system, except thefootnotes are moved from the foot of each page and are insteadaccumulated in numerical order at the end of the paper on aseparate page, called Notes.

Format for Endnotes

• After the title, Notes (centered), skip two lines and indentthe first line five spaces.

• Give the numeral followed by a period.

• Skip a space and then begin the note.

• Use the same format as for footnotes.

• Double-space the entire page.

Like footnotes, endnotes require a bibliography.

■ BIBLIOGRAPHY

The bibliography, at the end of the paper, is a list of all thesources referred to in the footnotes. Each source is listed onlyonce—in alphabetical order by the authors’ last names (not inthe order you used them), and in the same format as for thefootnotes, with these exceptions:

• Do not number the list.

• Double-space the entire list and do not add extra spacesbetween entries.

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5. Barbara Crossette, “Burgers Are the Globe’s Fast Food?

Not So Fast.” New York Times, sec. 4 (November 26, 2000).

• Use reverse indentation, beginning each entry at the leftmargin and indenting subsequent lines five spaces or halfan inch.

• Reverse the authors’ names, last name first. Reverse only thenames of the first author listed when there are co-authors.

• Follow the author’s name with a period.

• When an author has written more than one work, use athree-em dash ( ) followed by a period instead ofrepeating the name.

• For articles, follow the title with a period (inside thequotation marks).

• For books, newspapers, and popular magazines, give datesand other publishing information without parentheses.

• For journal articles, place the date in parentheses after thevolume number—just as in footnotes.

In addition, this system allows you to list a SupplementaryBibliography—a list of sources that you read for background ortangential information but did not actually refer to in the report.

For further details, see pages 136–145 and the following samplebibliography.

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